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charharkness

It Only Takes A Minute (Part 2)

Jan 13, 2009 13:46

Title: It Only Takes A Minute
Chapter: 2/?
Pairing: Gary/Mark
Rating: PG-15?
Summary: Mark and Gary try their hardest to focus on the tango whilst they have other things on their mind. Namely each other.
Warning: A couple of swear words. A slight mention of a sexual situation (like that's a warning! ;))
Disclaimer: This isn't real. Durrr.
A/N: (Most of ) ( Read more... )

gary/mark, fan fiction, take that, barlowen

Comments 17

ocd_pixie January 13 2009, 16:01:20 UTC

Ohhhh, I'm so excited for the next chapter now! I love how you've built up the tension between them, having to carry on with the show while wanting nothing more than to finally be together. Hope there's more soon! ♥

charharkness January 13 2009, 22:35:44 UTC

Woo! I shall try and get it up sooner than I did this one! Thank you very much :) Glad you enjoyed it.

barlowen_babe January 13 2009, 17:05:21 UTC

OMG I Love It!!

Mark && Gary Are Soooo Cute && Now I Really Wanna Know What Gary's Gonna Say!! I'm Hooked! :D

BTW I'm Sorry That I Didn't Reply On The First Chapter, Which Was Brilliant Too!

Can't Wait For More!!

xxx

charharkness January 13 2009, 22:36:52 UTC

:D thanks so much. It's such a good feeling to have people hooked to something i'm writing :D :D :D
You did comment on the first chapter hun, thanks!

laura1688 January 13 2009, 18:00:49 UTC

I agree with ocd_pixie, nice build up of tension. I loved how you focussed on Mark's thoughts too :) well done cant wait for more!

charharkness January 13 2009, 22:38:14 UTC

Awhh wow thank you. That's what I wanted to achive so i'm so glad you picked up on it! So nice to get good comments from you seen as you're such a brilliant writer! Thank you! More asap :)

laura1688 January 13 2009, 23:09:13 UTC

Aww there's compliments all round! Thanks so much :)

anniina85 January 14 2009, 10:49:41 UTC

WOW! What is Gary about to say?!? and on stage!
This is very exciting and the next chapter should be interesting ;)
Loved all the build up and the tension between the boys! Waiting for more :)

charharkness January 14 2009, 15:16:46 UTC

;) you'll have to wait and see. (Although i'm sure you might have a good idea :P)
WOW thank you so much! :)

delilah_60 January 15 2009, 21:29:08 UTC

Just got around to reading this...

Wow, the suspence is killing me here! Is Gary really gonna say it on that stage? Love how all Mark's emotions are all over the place.

charharkness January 17 2009, 17:50:29 UTC

:D Glad you're enjoying it! More will be up asap!
Hmm, you'll have to wait and see ;)
:) thank youuu.