{fic} White Lies - Chapter 1

[charcoaldonkey]

Title: White Lies
Author: charcoaldonkey 
Pairing: OhnoxNino (with a little JunxAiba)
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-13 (for now.. hehe)
Summary: The rain beat down harder and Ohno looked like he’d been shot. He fell to his knees and ran his hands through his hair as tears spilled down his cheeks. “Nino…” He whispered, “Please… don’t do this.”

Comments

[sky_rain21]

it's pretty interesting :D

[charcoaldonkey]

Thank you~! ^.^
It's really the first Ohmiya fanfic I've ever posted online so I'm a little nervous to see if it's okay or not! Hahaha >.<
Thank you for commenting!

[spangleayee]

Ah, this is really interesting ^^

But, just 1 question, is it like, all angst? 'Cause i pretty much can't read angst xD (I'm much too soft >.< )

:)

[charcoaldonkey]

Thanks!!
Well, I don't want to give TOO much away, but i'd have to say about... 70% Is angst -.-
But I try not to leave a fic with a depressing end sooo.. if that's too much a hint for the ending, gomen !
Thank you for reading~ ^.^

[rio_sora]

sad T_T but so intriguing! can't wait for next! thanks for sharing! :DDD

[charcoaldonkey]

Thank you~
I think i'll be posting them every second day so you won't have to wait too long! ^_^
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[morninglights]

Hmm... it's interesting. You left many questionmarks in my head and now I want to know why Nino is doing such cruel things to Ohno although they were so happy together first.
And I liked the part when Nino woke up, it was really nice written :)

[charcoaldonkey]

Thank you very much!
I love this pairing, they're so great >.<
And trust me, it gets crueler *dodges rotten fruit*
Thanks for the comment~ ^.^

[jade_lil]

very interesting.. and Nino's being a total bastard so early in the story.. will wait for the next..

[charcoaldonkey]

Hahahaha would it sound terrible if I said I love writing bastard!Nino?
And Ohmiya is just so .. Kyyaahh! <3 *insert keysmash here*
I'll be updating soon~ Thanks for reading!