{fic} White Lies - Chapter 2

Sep 29, 2010 16:45

Title: White Lies
Author: charcoaldonkey  
Pairing: OhnoxNino (with a little JunxAiba)
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-13 (for now.. hehe)
Summary: The rain beat down harder and Ohno looked like he’d been shot. He fell to his knees and ran his hands through his hair as tears spilled down his cheeks. “Nino…” He whispered, “Please… don’t do this.”

White Lies - Chapter 2 )

l: chaptered, p: junxaiba, b: arashi, g: angst, r: pg-13, p: ohnoxnino

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anesato September 29 2010, 20:08:10 UTC
Omg Noooo I crying now ;((((( what hapend betwen Ohmiya, Ohno is really cold towards Nino, but wonder what is reason that altitude
Ok I waiting for more chap;DDD

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charcoaldonkey September 29 2010, 23:14:11 UTC
Awww gomen! *Wipes tears*
And only time will tell, dear reader ^.^
Next chapter in two days!!
Thanks for the comment ^_^

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featherohno September 29 2010, 21:43:48 UTC
sweet..what happen to riida? at jun place? eh? nani? poor nino..he miss riida...next chapter..onegai..

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charcoaldonkey September 29 2010, 23:15:15 UTC
Hahahaha well the next chapter starts explaining some things i believe~
Thank you for reading~! ^_^

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renjigurl14 September 29 2010, 21:49:49 UTC
Wow! you updated so quickly! Happy reader is happy :D

I'm kind of glad Nino's feeling a bit hurt. He was a jerk in the last chapter, but then agsin I can't point fingers cause I don't know what happened between them yet. Any hints?

But yeah anyway, although this chappie is short, it was well written and I can't wait to read more ^^

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charcoaldonkey September 29 2010, 23:17:24 UTC
Thank you so much~! ^.^
Yes, he WAS a jerk!! But i guess everyone has their reasons ne?
Hehehe the next chapter explains it a bit more though ^_^
Thanks for commenting~! <3

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ichi_toshimiya September 30 2010, 02:45:12 UTC
Ow my God Nino crying?

Really what happen to them?
What make them like that...
Nino what have you done?

And Ohchan, at Jun place?
Don't say it...
Don't please...
Please don't like what I imagine it was... >.<

Thank you for this...

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charcoaldonkey September 30 2010, 11:05:23 UTC
Hahahaha i just love writing Nino crying scenes,
because in real life it's so hard to imagine it happening ne?
Thank you for the comment~! ^_^

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sky_rain21 September 30 2010, 13:50:45 UTC
oh not good T___T

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charcoaldonkey September 30 2010, 16:13:40 UTC
Hahahaha! I agree T_T
Poor Ohmiya
Comments=Love~! ^.^

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