Comments | charade_youare: And the Clock Strikes One

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And the Clock Strikes One

Apr 21, 2011 21:54

Title: And the Clock Strikes One
Author: orhowfar
Spoilers: Through Deathly Hallows.
Pairings: None.
Rating/Warnings: PG
Word Count: 404
Disclaimer: It's all property of Jo.
Crossposted @ dissendiumff and hp_fanfiction

( Molly was tempted to throw the clock away from her, now, before she saw, but her eyes dragged to the final hand... )

character/hp: molly weasley, rating: pg, .fandom: harry potter

Comments 2

aurorawest April 29 2011, 14:02:17 UTC

GAH. This is so lovely. This line broke my heart:

George's hand twitched between “home” and “work,” right on the edge of “lost.”

And I very nearly burst out sobbing when I got to

She trailed her gaze along the hand that bore the inscription Fred Weasley. It rested at “home.”

Really really well done.

orhowfar April 30 2011, 22:02:20 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it, particularly those two lines because those are the two lines I kept tweaking and changing. ♥