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like the sun 004

Jul 26, 2009 15:15

Title: Like The Sun
Prompt: Dreams/Illusions
Year: 2009
Type: Original
Characters: Yun, Ciel
Word Count: 151
Rating: T
Disclaimer: All is mine.
Notes: Decided to try my hand at stream of conscious. I hope it's different enough from what semiautosaint's stuff is like!

Summary: Something was going on. Something terrible. The stars weren't shining like they did ( Read more... )

.like the sun, !lupindrake

Comments 2

ouji_tan January 12 2010, 05:14:17 UTC

Stream of consciousness is a tricky, tricky thing. You seem to have gotten it down pat though B)b I know if I wrote it I'd end up talking about gum and the computer screen and gljfalkfj. That's what it is right? Just the thoughts that get into your head, disjointed and all that?

S-SO FAR SO GOOD OTOUTO-- YOU NEED TO WRITE MOAR

ketsudan January 14 2010, 03:38:21 UTC

Don't I know it. Faulkner really got me into it, and I have been experimenting since then, most of it not seeing the light of day. But I do really need to work on this more.

And yes, stream of conscious is your thoughts all put together. Grammar, structure, and other things such as punctuation and verb agreement can and often ignored, with thoughts skipping around and connecting in later parts, with repetitions of important things and anything that might make something go "HEY HEY I'M IMPORTANT WATCH OUT FOR ME!"

I am so glad you liked it!