Lost_Land: The Ship That Never Was

[chaoticprose]

Story Title: She Wasn't Alone
Lost Fan Fiction by chaoticprose
Pairing: Claire/MiB
Comments: For Lost_Land Challenge Fourteen
Rating: PG-ish
Disclaimer: Lost belongs not to me. :)

Comments

[slightlyjillian]

Hey, I really enjoyed this. I hadn't thought much about what happened to Claire when she was gone during this time and your story explores it well. Especially her surreal acceptance of not-Christian and his change to the Man in Black. I love the part with the mango. Very visual, and I could totally hear polite & awkward Claire in the dialogue. :)

[chaoticprose]

Aw, thanks! I can't tell you how much that means coming from you. :) It's a little choppy, but I'm glad it came across well. I'm kinda obssesed with the idea of these two, so it was nice to have an excuse to get it down on paper. :)

[jemmalynette]

I really liked this, Julia! I am dying to know what happened to Claire after she followed MiB in to the woods. So this was a very interesting read! Unique ship too! Great job :)

[ciaimpala]

This was really good Julia! Very in character, and I loved that you filled in what we as viewers never got to see.