the upsides of a destroyed kitchen

May 25, 2008 21:39



He knew something was wrong with his first step into the kitchen. Sugar crunched under his feet, an eerie sound in the silence. Icing sugar and flour and cocoa were smeared across the smooth black of his counter, and the oven was hanging open. He felt a bundle of dread build in his gut. The Someone had at least washed up; a haphazard pile of ( Read more... )

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imladra May 26 2008, 00:08:17 UTC
Aww. How sweet. I love Watanuki licking that icing he wiped off of Doumeki...but my mind is naughty that way. ^_^ Don't mind me!

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chaotic_cupcake May 27 2008, 09:18:09 UTC
Haha, I was so considering turning it naughty there... but I reallyreallyreally can't write lemons (I kind of run away from my PC, blushing) so I left it innocent. I'm glad you liked it though!!

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popkin16 May 26 2008, 00:24:50 UTC
So sweet! I really enjoyed this. I think my favorite part was how Watanuki was smiling, but Doumeki didn't really notice. I'm adding this to my memories :)

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chaotic_cupcake May 27 2008, 09:19:31 UTC
Thanks!! I really liked that idea of Doumeki not noticing that Watanuki was actually appreciating him type thing, I'm glad someone else did! *feels all special and glowy*

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popkin16 May 28 2008, 02:47:50 UTC
You're welcome! :)

I like the idea, too. Especially since Watanuki doesn't show out-right appreciation for Doumeki all the time (at least, not in canon).

XDXD

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nightingale_r3 May 26 2008, 09:34:07 UTC
That was so adorable!

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chaotic_cupcake May 27 2008, 09:19:42 UTC
Thanks!!

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meph_kurama May 26 2008, 12:22:16 UTC
This was perfect!! I loved the strikethroughts (They works so well to catch Watanuki's thinking!)

Thank you for posting!
Meph

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chaotic_cupcake May 27 2008, 09:20:24 UTC
Lol, I wouldn't go so far as to say perfect!! But thank you for the support!!

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kataren May 26 2008, 13:11:34 UTC
Doumeki: Budding Event Planner. XD ♥

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chaotic_cupcake May 27 2008, 09:20:54 UTC
Oh yeah, he's already picked out Watanuki's dress for their wedding!

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