Original Story of Angst (suprised? no? thought not)
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Look, see, there she sits. She is alone, and that is not common for her kind. Her powdery brown wings are open, flat as she tries to soak in the sunrise. She should go now, hide now, sleep now. She is not allowed in the day, she is a night-thing, a dark thing, a secret thing. She is not a pretty-thing, not a day-thing, not a happy-thing. Her ( Read more... )
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Other Than That: i reeeeeeally reeeeeeally like the whole Evolution Of Your Writing thing and all the random Hyphens and run-on descrips and suchlike. sometimes it is a little hard to read but it's ok because it's getting nice and structured and it's very fitting for Whimsical Idyllic Phantasy Impressionist Type Stuph.
i SO knew she was going to die but i thought she would be burned up by the sun in like two seconds or something; the way you did it was nicer. yay luff for brown eyes. <3 "dreams in vivid colour in vivid love" = LOVELY.
also: "From doing something, he thinks, mildly irritated. And then he realises that those are more rules, silly rules, he understands her anyway." HEY HEY HEY NO HATING ON THE GRAMMAR traitor to the cause how dare you. *squish*
Teh Darling Sister is yelling at me to get off computer-chan so she can go play RunEscape or whatever nonsense so i had better run away while my limbs are yet intact.
*last lingering glance at your boobs I MEAN brilliant
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And you keep insisting that you're Fai, you're Fai - look, if you lose an arm, you lose the argument, so if I -WERE- you, I'd keep the limb-ripping-off to a minimum. That aside, where's the luff for the icon I maded? *points imperiously* You may proceed to flatter me.
ALSO: that stupid permanent marker won't come off of my leg. Still. It's been, like, two whole days.
And the whole POINT was that he wanted to stop being bound by RULES and grammar=rules, which ARE stupid, as a matter of fact. So there.
And I'm <3 the writing style too, it makes things SO much more fun to write. And you know, I'm starting to see Caesar's point, what with the no-full-stops-let-alone-commas-heck-let's-leave-out-spaces-too thing. Seriously, looooooooong sentences are fun.
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your icon is very very hot. if i phlatter it enough can i tie it up and do BAD BAD things to it?? also i forgot to say THANK YOU FOR SENDING ME TRULY DIVINE RINSESS ARTWORK. at some point i must link you to the RinxSess forums (fora, let us me Latin nerds and use jussive subjunctives) and then you must write phic for it and make me squee.
p.s. will read and comment on the shiny new 104 i see you have posted at a later stage (read: when Darling Baby Sister is not in the wroom)
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And no, you cannot do scary evil things to my icon, sorry, sucks to be you. That is a VIP privilege only. Yes, yes, RinxSess forums are gooooood. (I'm gonna assume that "me" was actually a "be" cross-dressing, 'kay?) No fic promises though, I can be SO DAMN Mary-Sue at times.
p.s. you had bloody well better or ELSE. (muahahahaha)
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