Dark Haired Children, Chapter 1.

Aug 31, 2010 20:24



title: Dark Haired Children.
author: channings.
rating: T.
type: multi-chapter.
status: work in progress.
description: Jacob Black is haunted by vivid dreams of the girl he loves - pale, furious, deadly. But she knows her feelings now and despite her approaching nuptials, Jacob is convinced he can save her. 'Until your heart stops beating' was a promise.

You were right, I'm not your Bella anymore. )

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audreyii_fic September 8 2010, 02:16:07 UTC
Only one chapter in and my heart is already broken :(

It's good. You know that, I think, but I'm saying it anyway. It's very, very good.

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channings September 9 2010, 00:04:06 UTC
Aww, I wasn't sure if it would be liked so thank you for saying so. :)

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rawrlexi September 11 2010, 23:41:17 UTC
I completely and utterly agree.

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channings September 13 2010, 05:23:59 UTC
Aw, thank you!

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ilovewolves September 8 2010, 05:25:03 UTC
I totally agree with @audreyii_fic. This was enough to have a knot in my throat and yet leave me wanting more.

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channings September 9 2010, 00:04:50 UTC
Aww, thank you! I'm working on the next few chapters as we speak.

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ilovewolves September 9 2010, 01:10:17 UTC
Awesome!! How many chapters do you think it'll end up being?

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channings September 13 2010, 05:23:45 UTC
I'm not sure because I keep switching parts around but at this moment, it seems like it will be fifteen chapters.

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maria_madalena September 8 2010, 12:40:54 UTC
Very good!

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channings September 9 2010, 00:04:58 UTC
Thank you very much. :)

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lezah_hctiw September 8 2010, 13:06:56 UTC
Great job! I'll be watching out for this one! :)

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channings September 9 2010, 00:05:15 UTC
That means a lot to me, thanks!

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lsjcandy September 8 2010, 14:39:20 UTC
Like it, poor Jake.. :(

Anyways, hope you'll keep posting, I'll be watching this one.

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channings September 9 2010, 00:06:06 UTC
I know. :( I feel like I'll be getting a lot of 'poor Jake' comments, but thank you for wanting to stick through it!

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