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Dark Haired Children, Chapter 4

Oct 06, 2010 00:30

title: Dark Haired Children, Chapter 4.
author: channings.
rating: T.
type: multi-chapter.
status: work in progress.
description: Jacob Black is haunted by vivid dreams of the girl he loves - pale, furious, deadly. But she knows her feelings now and despite her approaching nuptials, Jacob is convinced he can save her. 'Until your heart stops beating' was a ( Read more... )

Comments 16

lsjcandy October 6 2010, 05:28:12 UTC

HAHA, burn for Bella ;D
I'm usually against any Jacob/.. pairing if it's not Bella, but if Bella's jealous, it's fun :D

Looking forward to next week!

channings October 6 2010, 05:35:12 UTC

Believe me, I hate everyone who isn't Bella for Jacob. Jacob and Bella makes too much sense for me to invent females for him to be with instead! Haha.

lsjcandy October 6 2010, 15:43:02 UTC

Same here :)

dredhedred October 6 2010, 08:12:11 UTC

Wonderful to see Jake acting like a proper teenager for once!
Good job. :)

channings October 6 2010, 18:00:14 UTC

Exactly! I am convinced that there is a Jacob who exists beyond patrolling and Bella. Thank you! :)

arysani October 6 2010, 12:21:59 UTC

“I'm not letting you go there alone, Jake. That girl is going to date rape you.”

Bella, your chivalry is astounding. If only it wasn't to keep an eye on him ;o)

I too am surprised - jealous!Bella is more amusing than I expected. And I love the imprint quip and how he comes back with "someone other than you". Don't know whatcha got til its gone, B. Tsk tsk.

channings October 6 2010, 18:01:12 UTC

I'm really glad that you enjoyed her, I wasn't sure how people would take this chapter!

nemesisstar October 6 2010, 12:40:36 UTC

This is such a great story so far! And I adore jealous!Bella so very much. ;o) Can't wait to see where this goes!

channings October 6 2010, 18:01:33 UTC

Thank you so much! Oh my god, your icon is amazing.

sleepy_sheep683 October 7 2010, 00:14:02 UTC

I must admit, I like a jealous Bella starting to get a clue.

I like how you handled Jacob here and showed him as a teenage boy managing to cut loose for the first time in ages and just have a bit of fun. Kind of makes you sad about what the Cullens and Bella keep putting him through. Curiouser and curiouser...

Oh, and the icon nemesistar is sporting? It's from Dan Bergstein Blogs Twilight If you haven't read this then do so right now, young lady. It will change your life. He's up to chapter 15 of 'Breaking Dawn' right now.

channings October 7 2010, 01:49:26 UTC

Thank you, thank you. :)

I have read it before and I love his blogs so much. I'm rereading Breaking Dawn now just so I can remember all the things he's making fun of, lol! I just wasn't aware that people icon-ed his pictures.