Dark Haired Children, Chapter 3.
title: Dark Haired Children, Chapter 3.
author: channings.
rating: T.
type: multi-chapter.
status: work in progress.
description: Jacob Black is haunted by vivid dreams of the girl he loves - pale, furious, deadly. But she knows her feelings now and despite her approaching nuptials, Jacob is convinced he can save her. 'Until your heart stops beating' was a ( Read more... )
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he started to ask - this was still so strange to him, despite its wonderfulness - but then she was kissing her way down his body, tugging his pants down, lowering the waist of his boxers...“God, Bella.”
How come this kind of lines ALWAYS make me feel hot inside? Yeez.
Anyways, loved it ^^
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Relationships are about sacrifice.
What I know is that I can't live without him. That's what's important.
I hate her. You're writing her perfectly, she's exactly in character, this is all excellent, but God I hate her.
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The amount of hatred and annoyance I have towards Bella right now is making me want to run outside, sugary snack in hand and stab some random stranger with it.
Anyway, this was really good. I would like for Jacob to cuss her out already but I guess he can't really do that anymore.
... but you know he wants to. =D
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