Dark Haired Children, Chapter 2.

[channings]

title: Dark Haired Children, Chapter 2.
author: channings.
rating: T.
type: multi-chapter.
status: work in progress.
description: Jacob Black is haunted by vivid dreams of the girl he loves - pale, furious, deadly. But she knows her feelings now and despite her approaching nuptials, Jacob is convinced he can save her. 'Until your heart stops beating' was a

Comments

[lsjcandy]

Love it, good writing :)
But did they run away for just one night, or am I supposed to wait and find out?

[channings]

It's more than one night - they haven't really accomplished anything by driving aimlessly, have they? They have a little more trip to go but her wedding is still in a week.

[channings]

Thank you so much, though! <3

[lsjcandy]

You're welcome, you're a great writer!

[lezah_hctiw]

The Isabella thing tugged my heartstrings. This is the first time I've read Jake saying that the Bella.

“No, like a motel ice cream cone,” he deadpanned. Cute! :) Good job! :)

[channings]

Aw, thank you!

[keziah42]

I LOLed that was funny.I love a funny Jake.

[channings]

Aww. :)

[liam22]

I'm such a sucker for road trip fics, and this one seems very intriguing. A very good chapter. And there banter at the end there was just priceless.

[channings]

A part of me thinks they're a bit overdone, which is why they're only a short road trip in this one.

[keziah42]

I wish it was a longer chapter! I want to know what happens next!
I love that J&B are on a mini road-trip. I also love how honest Jake is.

Great writing! I cant wait for the next chapter!

[channings]

Chapters will definitely be longer from here on. :) And thank you!

[audreyii_fic]

Intrigued about where this is going. I want to smack Bella. This is, of course, the peril of keeping her in character ;)