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[chair_umpire]

Watch Him Bleed
by cuentosdelalma

Comments

[calzamante]

Shona, I've told you how amazingly powerful I think this is, and that still stands. It's painful and uncomfortable and upsetting--which is a testament to how much of you you have put into it. I love you. ♥

[shana0809]

♥ I'm not sure the me is a good thing, but I think it works here.

[calzamante]

Well, no--but I think that the fact that you can turn it into something so strong sort of is. In a slightly heartbreaking kind of way, ugh. ♥

[liroa15]

You know how much I hate this story, and you know why, and you know why that's a good thing. ♥

[shana0809]

:P Gaston is authentic okay. There's no sugar in this one, and it's just better for it I think. I hope

[liroa15]

Yes. ♥

[flvy]

oh god

[shana0809]

Is that good or bad? Cause it's not really telling me much....

[flvy]

good

[shana0809]

:p At least it was realistic

[krisherdown]

Rather painful in imagery with the broken mug. Always feeling alone and now making sure he's literally alone as well. Powerful writing.

[shana0809]

Thank you.

[triplebagel]

:'( I probably shouldn't have read this again while in an emotional mood. (And right before Davis Cup, too.) I really miss him and just thinking of everything he must have gone through with his depression, it just makes me sad.

This is so painful, but so real. Poor Gaston, feeling inadequate and driving away the person he loves because it's easier, yet at the same time hating it.

<3 Thank you.

[shana0809]

:'( Sorry it made you feel bad, bb. But I'm glad it feels real.