The Night in Grant Park

Nov 15, 2008 23:09



Title:  The Night in Grant Park
Author:  Chadini
Rating:  T.
Pairing:  GSR.
Spoilers: Season 9.
Summary:  Grissom and Sara discuss the election results.
Words:  530
AN:  Thanks to jungle_mag  for the beta and more importantly this is for her.
The Night in Grant Park )

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Comments 15

Oh! lovalley November 16 2008, 13:25:02 UTC
I can see them having this discussion but to find out it was a dream seemed so sad!! Thank you for sharing this with us!

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Re: Oh! chadini November 16 2008, 22:44:22 UTC
Thanks. After the last few eps, I was feeling a bit angsty.

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Re: Oh! lovalley November 17 2008, 00:25:35 UTC
The angst! I appreciate you sharing your skill. It makes me feel less alone about my favorite fictional characters. My husband is a science guy so my angst falls on deaf ears. LOL!

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vegawriters November 16 2008, 16:54:31 UTC
*sniff* She's not really gone ... she's not really gone ... she's not really gone ...

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chadini November 16 2008, 22:45:02 UTC
Maybe if we all click our heels she will be back.

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zequins November 16 2008, 21:12:02 UTC
That was cute ;) Even if she wasn't really there :P Great work!

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chadini November 16 2008, 22:45:38 UTC
Thanks...I'm glad that you liked it and thanks for taking the time to review

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buffyangellvr23 November 16 2008, 22:03:19 UTC
nice work :)

I didn't like Palin's hunting stance but support a lot of her other views. Just like I have a lot of respect for those scientists who *are* questioning Darwin, and yes there are some.

But I'll shut up there because this isn't the place for it and go back to CSI. I want her back too *Cries* I want GSR back. I better get my happy ending when he leaves. *pouts*

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buffyangellvr23 November 16 2008, 22:03:40 UTC
aww I missed the dream part. *cries*

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chadini November 16 2008, 22:48:01 UTC
Sorry...after the last few episodes, I was feeling a bit dramatic.

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chadini November 16 2008, 22:47:04 UTC
I was trying to not get too political, but that is the great thing about America - we can all have our own views. Thanks for reading!

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emptyeyes1 November 17 2008, 04:27:07 UTC
Very nicely done. What I liked the most was the twist ending. Reminding me somewhat of OHenry. What I thought was just a cute, fluffly piece (I mean that as a compliment) turned out to be very layed and surprising with a good measure of angst. Not all writers could put it off as well you did. Kudos! :D

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chadini November 17 2008, 21:57:08 UTC
Thank you very much. That certainly is high praise. I wanted to do a fluffy piece and it jsut didn't work out that way. Thanks for taking the time to let me know what you thought.

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