Family Disturbance

[chadini]

Author: Chadini
Pairing: Sara
Rating: G.
Words: 100
Summary: What may have pushed Sara closer to the edge.

Disclaimer: None of the characters are mine and if CBS wants to come after me, well, as long as they bring David Rambo, I don’t care.

A/N:  The prompt for this little story is LV Metro Event Code 417     Family Disturbance

Comments

[hunterseaker]

WOW that is really good! I like it alot.

Good WORK!

[chadini]

Thanks. That episode killed me :(

[buffyangellvr23]

wow nice...you caught her well.

[chadini]

Thanks. I tried to capture what she was feeling during that scene.

[zamboni12]

Wow, very good drabble! You hit the mark! Intense and believable.

[chadini]

Thanks! I love your icon.

[slip_of_the_pen]

Wow, this was harsh and stilted and dark and fragmented - but in a good way! This is definitely meant as a compliment. I found it evoked the same kind of building hopelessness that this episode did, and I commend you for doing that in so few words. Great interpretation!

[chadini]

Thanks. That was the angle I was trying to take. That scene for me seemed to mark the change in her character. We knew things were bad when she could just stare without any real emotion at the events in front of her. I appreciate the insightful comments.