Fic: You Forgave, and I Won't Forget (13/20)

[cgkm2099z]

Title: You Forgave, and I Won't Forget
Author: cgkm2099z
Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Spoilers: 6.02
Rating: S - for Smut
Warning If smut offends you, you're probably better off skipping this chapter. Oh yeah, lots of language too...
Word Count: 10,315
Disclaimer: I do not own Community. Community, and its characters, are the creation of the great Dan

Comments

[peef_rimgar]

You'll still be able to beta read for me if you're in Antartica yeah? :P awesome chapter cant wait to see what's next and If you want bonus points from your Aussie readers you should add a part with AFL in it ;)

[cgkm2099z]

Oh, sure. The ice breakers can deliver it :)

And thanks!! I'm not sure I could do justice to the AFL though. I don't know much about it. Besides, Annie doesn't watch sports :-P

[peef_rimgar]

Awesome :D

Oh well it was worth a shot ;)

[aussiefan1]

It should be pretty obvious from my name that I'm an Aussie. I also happen to be a Sydneysider

[loveobsessed999]

Um . . . I think you might have broke me with this. I'll write a more thorough review when I can think again.

Edit: Okay I'm back, finally able to think clearly as long as I don't read and scroll straight to the comments

[cgkm2099z]

Sorry for breaking you... (Actually, I'm not :-P)

So I saw that this was posted and I cheered and yelled 'He updated it' out loud which gave me a weird look from my family. And then I realized very quickly I needed to vacate the room to avoid awkwardness. And then I read it 5 times.

I think I cheered when I posted it. I was so happy to have it done, haha. This has been torturing me for a while now. Sometimes when they've been working on something difficult for a long time, I'll hear guys say "It was like giving birth." That always kinda bothered me, cuz guys cannot and will not ever know what that's like. So I won't say that. But this was really difficult. I hope your family didn't think you were being too weird. :) But my goodness, I don't think I've read it 5 times lol.

DON'T YOU DARE MOVE TO ANTARTICA I'D MISS YOU AND YOUR FIC AND I NEED TO YOU FINISH WRITING THIS

Ok, you talked me out of it. But perhaps that wasn't wise. Think about it, what else would there be to do in Antarctica besides write fics?

AND ALL THE OTHER FICSHow

[loveobsessed999]

Ok I remember very clearly responding to this but I guess I didn't so yeah . . . I'm officially crazy. I blame the hot sex in this chapter :P.

Sorry for breaking you... (Actually, I'm not :-P)

Well then. I hope you're proud of yourself :P.

I think I cheered when I posted it. I was so happy to have it done, haha. This has been torturing me for a while now. Sometimes when they've been working on something difficult for a long time, I'll hear guys say "It was like giving birth." That always kinda bothered me, cuz guys cannot and will not ever know what that's like. So I won't say that. But this was really difficult. I hope your family didn't think you were being too weird. :) But my goodness, I don't think I've read it 5 times lol.Well at this precise moment, I've read it a *bit* more than five times :P. I totally understand the relief of just getting something you've been working on forever out there-- and I'm glad you FINALLY did :P. Oh my family has known I'm weird for a while now, so once I muttered something about fanfiction

[jdp1979]

You need to send this fic to Antarctica. It seriously needs to cool down, way too hot. ;-)

[cgkm2099z]

LOL, thanks man :)

[cgkm2099z]

Thank you! My original plan was to write a PG-13 version of this chapter as well, but it ended up being just too much work. :-( Anyway, I'll be back to work on Chapter 14 this week :)

Regarding The Soup, I just loved the idea of Annie thinking Joel McHale is hot lol. She has a type :)

Finally...

[cori_the_bloody]

...got my shower sex. And it was A+. You did not hold back at all with this. Which is great. Jeff and Annie would totally be all over each other like this. And I love that Annie's got a wicked side when it comes to sex.

I love the building of the tension at the opera, and the way they're so in sync with their thoughts. That was a nice touch. I loved that Jeff stuttering and flushing encouraged Annie's naughty sweet-nothings.

The inglorious demise of the stupid, last button was hilarious. I laughed out loud at that line.
I also really liked that Jeff had to 'defeat' Britta before him and Annie could get to the sexing.

Have I mentioned that I really appreciated the shower sex yet? Because damn.

And, finally, I love that J/A squabbled over who won sexing. Especially that Annie thinks she won because she got more orgasms.

Well done, friend. Post the next chapter sooner. ;P

RE: Finally...

[cgkm2099z]

...got my shower sex. And it was A+. You did not hold back at all with this. Which is great.

I'm glad you liked it, because it was your request haha. That scene doesn't happen without your comment in chapter 7 :)

And I love that Annie's got a wicked side when it comes to sex.

That's when her inner Alison Brie comes out ;-)

The inglorious demise of the stupid, last button was hilarious. I laughed out loud at that line.
I also really liked that Jeff had to 'defeat' Britta before him and Annie could get to the sexing.Thanks! I liked those parts too. The first part happens to me sometimes. If I'm nervous or otherwise agitated and I have to do something precise, sometimes I have trouble with it and tend to refocus my anxiety on the precise thing I'm trying to do, and I end up getting angry at something like a button haha. As for the second part, I was trying to think of a legitimate reason for Jeff to reveal Troy's biggest confession. The nipple play thing seemed like a good way to go, because why would Britta only tell Troy and Abed

RE: Finally...

[loveobsessed999]

THANK YOU FOR THE SHOWER SEX SCENE!!!!! Also, hi :D.

RE: Finally...

[cori_the_bloody]

haha! You're welcome. ;)

Hi!