Fic: You Forgave, and I Won't Forget (8/20)

Apr 11, 2015 00:14

Title: You Forgave, and I Won't Forget
Author: cgkm2099z
Pairing: Jeff/Annie
Spoilers: S5
Rating: PG-13
Warning Language
Word Count: 4,714
Disclaimer: I do not own Community. Community, and its characters, are the creation of the great Dan Harmon. I think it's still owned by Sony Pictures Television, but after the hack, I'm not so sure. The title ( Read more... )

jeff winger, community, jeff/annie, fanfiction, annie edison

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cori_the_bloody April 29 2015, 16:22:50 UTC
Motherfuckin' Annie Edison! You go girl! I'm so proud; that last scene was perfect.

Speaking of perfect...Simmons! Of course it's Simmons! He was there when J/A was in its beginning stages, and he is going to help bring them together by being awful. That was a great twist because you set it up so perfectly for Alan and then BAM! Simmons. That was some crafty writing, my friend.

The Caroline scene with all the sexual tension was spectacular.

I don't have much else specific to say, but I really enjoyed every bit of this chapter. Onward!

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cgkm2099z April 29 2015, 18:24:31 UTC
Ok, so, your comments are starting to make me squee. I'm not worthy! I'm not worthy! Thank you, though :)

Alan would've been fun to have go up against Jeff, but they already did that in the S3 finale, so I wanted to try something else. Plus, Alan turned into kind of a train wreck in S5. Simmons struck me as someone who would actually make a pretty good lawyer, he's got the charisma, debate, and speaking skills. So why not, right? And he's one of my favorite villains in Community. He's just so easy to dislike. And, as you mentioned, there's the whole connection with J/A origins.

The Caroline scene with all the sexual tension was spectacular.

In a weird way, this scene was my inspiration for that: https://youtu.be/JzImcBeU65E?t=53

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