So, I kinda slacked this week but I've been feeling uneasy in regards to Renji (which is why I've been kind of neglecting him). People who know PoT, plzplz tell me if I'm making him too open/laid-back/whatever or if you think he's acting generally OOC. I fail at serious characters. D:
And yeah, if you've got anything for Gojyo or Amelia? Lay it on me, why not!
I don't remember what I did this week... Anakin came back? everything should be up in cfud_daily, but if there are an comments, questions or complaints about anything at all please go ahead.
Uh, let's see. Chisame's been here and there snarking with friends, welcoming Yzak back home, being told she's going to the very depths of Hell, making an onsen date with Sakura, and being disturbed by incestual coffee mugs. Evangeline was sekritly glad to see Anakin back safe, had a hatsuyume referencing a bunch of badfic which nobody's going to get unless they frequent #cfudbadfic (PIMP), is apparently NOT going as deep into Hell as Chisame is, and popped up to randomly snark at Stan a few times. Mutsumi sleepwalked, played with dinosaurs, and appeared randomly around camp to make people boggle at her . . . Mutsuminess.
Asuna escaped CFUD after a two-and-a-half month reprieve, during which I still neglected her like a neglecting thing. ;_;
Miroku again attempted to clothe the women in camp in leather, but alas.
Cagalli thought she would try to be a little more 'girlish' since she thought that's what she had to do, only to find out she is fine just the way she is. Daawww. She also argued with Jona about political stuff.
Now lately I've been confident with Kira, but now I'm going to ask for help. Did I handle the whole 'Fllay being attacked thing' plausibly? Kira immediately freaked the hell out, but was calmed down rather quickly. He's not seeking any sort of revenge...he's angry at Nishi but more of a 'puppy crapped on the carpet' sort of way instead of 'ZOMG YOU BASTARD' way. He's trying to understand why the things that happened happened.
Good? Bad? Should he be angrier/SEEDlier/angstier? Thank you! :D
To a none Seedie player, it felt really in line and consistant with what I've seen before... actually there was more than one point in there when I thought it was really going to go south badly. It made an interesting and difficult interaction all at the same time. I really did like that scene. To Kira's credit, the wounding wasn't actually that bad, he was able to see her, already treated, and he had Meer right there the whole time, it's a whole lot of positive forces helping with the calming thing.
The whole aftermath actually seems very Kira... honestly, am feeling quite off and off balance with Nishi... which can't be easy to play off while I'm not being consistent. Working on it though! What am trying to say is you've come off fine to me at least!
I don't think there are any problems with the way you played it. :)
I mean ... Kira knows how much it sucks to be around loud, yelly, holier-than-thou Fllay and he has cause to trust Nishi more than her, yes? Combined with what Nishi already mentioned, I really don't see Kira getting angry with him. :)
In regards to the way he handled Fllay, I thought that was pretty on-key too. He's always been more leniant with her, really, and unlikely to call her out when she's being an idiot.
River freaked out over all the blood and emo in the hospital, hid up in Alex's tree, was quiet for a few days, and then got sick of waiting and started building an addition to Habe Linkin for Simon, Kaylee, and herself to live in.
Oh yes, that comment. I'm well aware I haven't responded, and frankly, I wasn't going to. Last time I checked, this was a constructive criticism community, not a 'create inflammitory anonymouse posts that don't have even a hit of constructive to the criticism'. That's pretty damn cowardly. Shame on you, anonymouse. However, since you've asked again, I'll respond.
I don't like how your River is suddenly crushing on Robert, or forcing herself into the Ueki cast by building the joint cabin. I also agree with what was said above, how you seem to be playing her more like a charming, poetic eccentric who just has a funny but consistent way of speaking, rather than a truly dangerous, unstable and fundamentally damaged person, which imho would be more interesting. Right now, she's like a Noble Savage stereotype. -River's crush on Robert lasted like, five minutes, and is over. She declared it so in a comment somewhere. Why did it happen? River, while having an enormous brain, has not had to form any sort of interpersonal relationship since
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Thank you for your reply. I'm actually not the person who had the question (although I am the same mouse from earlier in this thread); I thought that perhaps you hadn't seen the comment, and since I was wondering a bit about the same things, I thought I would same time by linking the comment instead of writing my own. I had underestimated the rude tone of the original comment, and I apologize if you were upset.
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And yeah, if you've got anything for Gojyo or Amelia? Lay it on me, why not!
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Asuna escaped CFUD after a two-and-a-half month reprieve, during which I still neglected her like a neglecting thing. ;_;
Questions, comments, beatings?
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Miroku again attempted to clothe the women in camp in leather, but alas.
Cagalli thought she would try to be a little more 'girlish' since she thought that's what she had to do, only to find out she is fine just the way she is. Daawww. She also argued with Jona about political stuff.
Now lately I've been confident with Kira, but now I'm going to ask for help. Did I handle the whole 'Fllay being attacked thing' plausibly? Kira immediately freaked the hell out, but was calmed down rather quickly. He's not seeking any sort of revenge...he's angry at Nishi but more of a 'puppy crapped on the carpet' sort of way instead of 'ZOMG YOU BASTARD' way. He's trying to understand why the things that happened happened.
Good? Bad? Should he be angrier/SEEDlier/angstier? Thank you! :D
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The whole aftermath actually seems very Kira... honestly, am feeling quite off and off balance with Nishi... which can't be easy to play off while I'm not being consistent. Working on it though! What am trying to say is you've come off fine to me at least!
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I mean ... Kira knows how much it sucks to be around loud, yelly, holier-than-thou Fllay and he has cause to trust Nishi more than her, yes? Combined with what Nishi already mentioned, I really don't see Kira getting angry with him. :)
In regards to the way he handled Fllay, I thought that was pretty on-key too. He's always been more leniant with her, really, and unlikely to call her out when she's being an idiot.
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I don't like how your River is suddenly crushing on Robert, or forcing herself into the Ueki cast by building the joint cabin. I also agree with what was said above, how you seem to be playing her more like a charming, poetic eccentric who just has a funny but consistent way of speaking, rather than a truly dangerous, unstable and fundamentally damaged person, which imho would be more interesting. Right now, she's like a Noble Savage stereotype. -River's crush on Robert lasted like, five minutes, and is over. She declared it so in a comment somewhere. Why did it happen? River, while having an enormous brain, has not had to form any sort of interpersonal relationship since ( ... )
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