[Fic] proverbs are the key (oneshot)

Apr 10, 2008 23:00


 Title: proverbs are the key
Paring: Akame, AkamePi, Koyato, Ryoda, Tegomass, KinKi, T&T
Genre: fluff, humor, more vague smut
Rating: pg-13
Summary: Many life lessons can be learned through proverbs.
A/N: Even if it may not look like it at first, all the parts link together.  God I started this like half a year ago.  I’m really happy I got to finish it ( Read more... )

yamapi, kat-tun, jin, fanfiction, kinki kids, koyama, news, t&t, kame, je, shige

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dark_flare54 April 11 2008, 04:12:20 UTC
Aww that was sweet ♥

I love how everyone banded together to make sure the others (especially Yamapi) were happy ^_^

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ceylon_miko April 11 2008, 04:27:07 UTC
lol Thanks for the comment. JE boys got to band together with all that member-ai!

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dark_flare54 April 11 2008, 04:39:48 UTC
Umm...I noticed some grammar problems that kind of detract from the flow, so if you need/want a beta I could try to help you. If you want my help just send me a message and I'll give you my e-mail address.

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ceylon_miko April 11 2008, 04:46:03 UTC
I don't mind getting people to beta for me, but most people are far to busy to fix every thing I write. If you would like to try then that if fine with me.

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kuroiusagi93 April 11 2008, 04:32:50 UTC
Even if it may not look like it at first, all the parts link together.

It actually looks pretty obvious o_o Beautiful job :3

Omg AkamePi *__* My heart breaks at depressed and lonely Yamapi ;O;

I have to say my favorite proverb you used is the first one xD

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ceylon_miko April 11 2008, 04:50:12 UTC
Thanks for comment! I always feel like Yamapi is being left out. (I make such an angst fest)

lol the first proverb is totally Ryo-chan in a nutshell.

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miyukaii April 11 2008, 06:01:21 UTC
The story was good. :) I love it. ♥

Especially the AKAMEPI parts and of course, the RYODA scene.

Ryo is so in denial. Glad he is over it. :)

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ceylon_miko April 11 2008, 15:50:16 UTC
lol I couldn't help but add the Ryoda part in too. They are just so cute. I'm glad you liked it.

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snow_meow April 11 2008, 09:04:06 UTC
YamaPi is surely one lucky guy to be loved and cared for by so many. ^___^

I love the love and friendship that stretches across the different groups.

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ceylon_miko April 11 2008, 15:51:35 UTC
Yamapi is my favorite so he naturally gets all the love. <3 Thanks for the comment.

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sumomo_yuki April 11 2008, 09:19:21 UTC
the ending is happy ending yayyyyyyyyy!! and 3somes are awesome when it's akamepi! XDD

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ceylon_miko April 11 2008, 15:53:16 UTC
I know right? I have a weird think about write a lot of threesome things. Akamepi is like my favorite. Thanks for the comment.

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