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Unexpected Chapter 6

Feb 26, 2007 21:26

Title: Unexpected: Chapter Six
Author: Ceslas
Characters: Zoe/Jayne, Crew
Rating: PG
Word count: 2068
Disclaimer: Firefly owns me, I own words.
Comments: The sixth chapter in a collaboration between bookaddict43 and myself, a bit of a different pairing for both of us…

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"You're gonna be bigger than a flea. You're gonna be bigger than that old Poison Ivy Tree" razycrandomgirl February 27 2007, 04:20:46 UTC

That's our boy. Always getting himself into trouble. I wonder what's so come of it.

Re: "You're gonna be bigger than a flea. You're gonna be bigger than that old Poison Ivy Tree" ceslas February 27 2007, 04:23:06 UTC

Yeah, well a good tussle takes yer mind off'a things..ya know ;)

Sweet Icon! razycrandomgirl February 27 2007, 04:32:45 UTC

Fighting ... yeah I guess it gets rid of some tension. I always feel weird after a fight and during a fight.

Re: Sweet Icon! ceslas February 27 2007, 04:34:59 UTC

Most of us do...but Jayne seems to just get cheerier from a good fight- course it would help if he wasn't getting stabbed as well.

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ceslas February 27 2007, 13:56:25 UTC

Thank you! It is always nice to get even small words of support! Greatly appreciated *Hugs*

bookaddict43 February 27 2007, 13:05:51 UTC

Ooooooh! Great addition my friend! *hugs*

I like River's insights and her inability to be clear. I also like the relationship between her and Jayne. I love that its her and Simon that are seeing something of Jayne's feelings.

I like Zoe's realisation that she cares about Jayne - what's going to happen next?

If you've got insights I'd love to hear them!! *begs*

ceslas February 27 2007, 14:00:05 UTC

*Cheerful*!!!!! You liked it! Phew!

After nailing them all down and saying, "talk!" this is what they said. I wasn't rightly sure about River in this context, so I am glad she ended up being lucid in her ever so not lucid way. And Simon is not a total boob, he is human after all >;0)

Hmmm...insights will follow later... *Hugs*

romanceguru March 22 2007, 21:02:07 UTC

Love the River, Jayne stuff, but you know that’s a given. ;-p

This part especially: “Jayne?” She asked softly.

“Yeah?” He grunted, eyes not opening, groaning slightly.

“You are damaged.”

“You ain’t wrong genius.” His hand was clenched in the bunched fabric of his pants at his thigh.

ceslas March 23 2007, 04:14:31 UTC

*Squee!*

I loved that part myself... I could just hear that little voice she uses when she is concerned but stating fact at the same time. And of course he has to get little jibes in anyway >;0)