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Unexpected

Feb 11, 2007 16:07

Title: Unexpected: Chapter Four
Author: Ceslas
Characters: Zoe/Jayne, Crew
Disclaimer: Firefly owns me, I own words
Rating: PG
Word count: 1195
Comments: The fourth chapter in a collaboration between
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jayne, zoe, unexpected

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ceslas February 12 2007, 00:44:02 UTC

Thank you! Might guess that I love Jayne...It is always nice to see a new name posting a comment. We are having fun with it!

razycrandomgirl February 12 2007, 00:27:59 UTC

Nice dialog. And I really like the image of Mal trying to hang on to Serenity as she took off. -snicker-

ceslas February 12 2007, 00:45:17 UTC

Thank you darlin'. Took a bit of convincing, but here it is... Mal was bein' Mal, like always, even unconscious the man ain't got no sense.

bookaddict43 February 12 2007, 13:05:39 UTC

I like the conversation between Jayne and Nisham and what they carefully didn't say. I chuckled at Zoe's remark about the Captain and the extra chances. She really knows him!

Of course Kaylee would like the planet and Jayne be grumpy about it! And I think a certain mercenary might be realising that he feels an interest in Zoe?

Another good chapter here and now I have to think of something next...

ceslas February 12 2007, 18:09:46 UTC

Jayne just had to be impossible about this turn of events, especially since he wasn't included in the loop. Course he may be a little surprised at what being in the loop means. >;0)

Jayne, like Zoe...nahhhh >;0) He can be so adorable when he is being dense...lol Not sure he would recognize anything more than 'crew' friendliness with Zoe without Kaylee smackin' him a few more times...Men.

romanceguru March 21 2007, 06:44:39 UTC

Zoë grinned a little at that, “Extra chances are the Captain’s way of limiting boredom. Don’t got that particular problem my own self.” The women both laughed a little at that truth.

Is it bad that I’m enjoying all this picking on Mal while he’s half dieing? I just love their assessments of him, spot on.

Also, I love your Kaylee, you do her so well! Her and Jayne fighting like brother and sister was especially fun.: )

ceslas March 21 2007, 06:51:19 UTC

Me? Doing Kaylee well? *Looks around for someone else you are referring to*

I admit she is my hardest voice to capture...It only worked cause Jayne was there *Nods* He is my easiest voice, even if it doesn't look like it in my angsty fics and so on...but trust me, grown up Jayne...uh huh. Him I am comfortable with.

Mal is so easy to pick on though! And you picked my favorite line! Zoe and limiting boredom! tehe!