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ceslas

100 Word Mini No

Dec 21, 2006 00:37

Title: 100 Words Mini-No
Rating: R
Spoilers: Post-BDM
Characters: Jayne/River
Disclaimer: Firefly owns me, I own words
Notes: A 100 Word No for
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finding, jayne, river, 100 words, no

Comments 11

razycrandomgirl December 21 2006, 06:22:10 UTC

Again so sweet. You make me want to have River/Jayne Icons. I'll link you.

ceslas December 21 2006, 06:28:38 UTC

Sweet! Razycrandom is gettin' the sweet... yes! Success!

Wonderful! alexis_laforge December 21 2006, 06:43:16 UTC

I want this so much, in my head, to be a somewhat sleepy Jayne, at first, answering the almost always wide-awake River, growing simultaneously more alert and confused as the words move between them. When the River flows too fast, just hang on to your raft and try to avoid drowning. Or just give in and sink; in this River, you might even enjoy it.

Re: Wonderful! ceslas December 21 2006, 06:45:55 UTC

Right in one my friend- that is exactly what was happening! Well done, I got it right this tme! Glad you articulated it for me though... I can always count on you for good stuff!

They're voices are perfect alexis_laforge December 21 2006, 06:55:59 UTC

And neither of these characters is an easy one to write, so good on you for that one!

Hee; my guess... I'm working on a similar scene (although the characters couldn't be more different) right now... these scenes are the best ones to right! This kind of talk is so intimate and wonderful.

Re: They're voices are perfect ceslas December 21 2006, 07:21:36 UTC

Grateful hugs for such beautiful praise!

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ceslas December 26 2006, 01:30:08 UTC

Shiny indeed! tehe!

Jayne just wants to get to the heart of the matter...lol

bookaddict43 December 25 2006, 12:54:46 UTC

What a great conversation. and very true to their characters I think.

ceslas December 26 2006, 01:31:25 UTC

*Happy dance* Thank you darlin'... always looking for that truthsomeness to come through and happy when it does!

short and sweet anonymous June 16 2007, 10:18:49 UTC

Intimate...I love that you never let him get crude. And that for both of them, between them, words are never lies.

Re: short and sweet ceslas June 25 2007, 00:58:30 UTC

words are never lies

Truer things are rarely seen than their honesty with each other. Her being a reader is taken out of the equation with them and it becomes their innate pairing that speaks no lies. He speaks internally instead of in the bluster of posturing; she tells as she believes, lies take too much self-correction, not worth the investment.