Fanfiction: I Desire, I Feel

[cesaretech]

Title: I Desire, I Feel
Fandom: Harry Potter
Characters: Zacharias Smith and Susan Bones
Prompt: Birthday
Word Count: 1783
Rating: PG13
Summary: Zacharias never believed in Divination. It was all a bunch of philosophical nonsense, but Susan was dedicated to that rubbish. It helped her forget she was supposed to be hurting.
Author’s Notes: Concentrates on

Comments

[elohisa]

I think Susan knows more than Zacharias gives her credit for knowing. Whether she's right or wrong, she knows better than to dismiss things as easily as he always does when they don't fit into the way he sees the world

[cesaretech]

Writing these stories from one character's perspective has limited the dynamics of a lot of characters that I wish I could give more time to. However, I have taken a lot of time to try and give Susan the attention she deserves in this series, and it's great to hear that it has come across. Thank you. :)

[lylianf]

Susan hit a lot of points about Zacharias. I liked your emphasis of Zacharias' lack of control, because from what I've read of your writings, this truly describes his life. Thank you for writing this! I hope there's a future to Zacharias and Susan.

[cesaretech]

Zacharias' relationship with Susan is one of my favorite subjects to write. Thank you. I'm glad you are liking this. :)