Fanfiction: Green Like Me

[cesaretech]

Title: Green Like Me
Fandom: Harry Potter
Characters: Zacharias Smith, and the Hufflepuff and Slytherin Quidditch Teams
Prompt: Teammates
Word Count: 2893
Rating: PG13
Summary: After hearing that Slytherin planned to cheat in the upcoming match, the Hufflepuff Quidditch team sends an infiltrator to find out their plans. No polyjuice potion required.

Comments

[ryuugazaki]

Oh gosh, so many classic lines in this one!

“You’re blond. He’s blond. It’ll work.”

“Of course it’ll work, if you ignore height differences, eye colour, and basic social interactions.” Zacharias rolled his eyes at Tamsin’s reasoning, and began to think they were all off their rockers.

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The rules were few and sensible: Don’t run into Snape, keep a smug sense of self-satisfaction at all times, don’t run into Snape, make a condescending comment about Potter every now and then, and don’t run into Snape.

Oh Zach, you're more alike than you think :D

[cesaretech]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[zeitgeistic]

*clap clap*

I loved it! I think Zacharias is one of my top three favourite characters, and you did a really good job with him.

[cesaretech]

Thank you. :)

[peskywhistpaw]

Oh God. I laughed so hard. I'd quote some lines, but my favorites have already been pointed out a couple comments above me. :P

[cesaretech]

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :)

[phil_urich]

I really liked this story as it touched on a few things I enjoy seeing in a good Harry Potter fic. 1. Slytherins that are just as likely to play fair as anyone else. 2. Hufflepuffs being devious. Loyalty and friendship doesn’t necessarily equal powderpuff. 3. Zacharias playing Draco Malfoy is utterly hilarious

[cesaretech]

Thank you. You mentioned things I enjoy seeing in Potter fics myself, crack or serious. :)

[lylianf]

Your execution was flawless. As a crackfic, this was top notch. The conclusion was humorously anti-climatic and worked perfectly in. Great job!

[cesaretech]

Thank you. :)