Fanfiction: Let's Try This Again

[cesaretech]

Title: Let’s Try This Again
Fandom: Harry Potter
Characters: Zacharias Smith and Daphne Greengrass
Prompt: Triangle
Word Count: 370
Rating: PG
Summary: Three times Zacharias Smith almost met Daphne Greengrass.
Author’s Notes: A short drabble, and a mild dash of Bohemian Rhapsody.

The first time Zacharias Smith almost met Daphne Greengrass, he was

Comments

[elohisa]

Interesting how you portray Daphne. And it's also interesting how Zacharias never properly meets him, although he almost does at the end. If it were for his hurt pride and snarkiness.

I always like this style of writing. It's become a bit popular lately- especially within certain fandoms- but it's always lovely to read. The repetition of the style makes it flow well.

One of my favorite things about the Hogwarts grading systems: Trolls. Wouldn't you just hate to get one?

[elohisa]

Meets her and if it weren't. I really, really can't type today, can I? Lol.

[cesaretech]

That's okay, eventually all of our grammatical skills go to the fail. That's why our generation loves spell-check. Since a Troll is pretty much a D in our terms, I would cry if I got one. Thank you very much for your insightful compliments. :)

[peskywhistpaw]

“Watch where you’re stepping, Puffball” ...
Haha! You know, with all the fics I've read, I've never actually heard that one before... I love it. XD

And the bit about Zacharias not wearing his heart on his sleeve was just amazing. It's still so incredible how much insight you give on his character!

This is so great. I love Zacharias/Daphne.

[cesaretech]

Thank you, very much. It's very appreciated. :)

[ryuugazaki]

:O

[cesaretech]

Open mouth of approval or shocking disdain? Since you created this ship, your opinion is worth a lot. :)

[ryuugazaki]

Open mouth of shock (Followed by definite approval)!

There are so many possible facets to Daphne's character, since it's basically free-for-all, but this (The purely Slytherin yet still somewhat mysterious type) is the side of her I like the most. And as always, your Zacharias is dead on. I always thought that if you wrote any Z/D I would've wanted you to script him the way you always did in your past shorts...and that's exactly what happened!

I'm glad you wrote this :) Hope to see more.

P.S. "Puffball" is almost too good.

[cesaretech]

Thank you. It's nice to hear from you. :)

[nyaza]

OMG daph and Zach! Bleh, loved it, like always, guess not need to say that, but Daph &hearts!

[cesaretech]

Ha, thank you. :)