Fanfiction: Thanatophobia

[cesaretech]

Title: Thanatophobia
Fandom: Harry Potter
Characters: Zacharias and Mr Smith
Prompt: Insides
Word Count: 2044
Rating: PG13
Summary: In the attic full of family antiques and heritages, there hides a boggart.
Author’s Notes: It might contain a bit of dark imagery. Number four in the 100HPFanfic challenge.

Summer meant enjoying his own room for a

Comments

[ryuugazaki]

Yet another perfect portrayal -- you have me floored!

And Ezekiel is the perfect name :)

[cesaretech]

Thank you for the compliments. :)

[pathology_doc]

Interesting that the greatest fear for both of them was Zacharias lying dead. A neat twist.

Two bits of concrit: slight slips I spotted...
The word for fear of death is "Thanatophobia" - you're missing an A after the N.

"Exploding Snaps" should be "Exploding Snap".

[cesaretech]

I spell-checked that word twice and still missed it. Thank you kindly for catching it. :)

And thank you for the compliment.

[sirikit]

This is really great. I like how you've been exploring this theme of fathers and sons with Zacharias and his dad.

I really enjoyed this line: Those would be the first materials he would sell as soon as he inherited everything.

Oh, the entitlement.

[cesaretech]

Thank you greatly for the compliments. I'm glad you liked it. :)

[peskywhistpaw]

Oh, poor thing. Your Zacharias amuses me and breaks my heart at the same time. XD You really do have his character down amazingly well, and I like the way you've characterized his father - he's strict, but he still loves his son. Great work!

[cesaretech]

Thank you for the compliments. :)