okay you have NO idea how long I've been waiting for an action-y au and DAMN this is everything I've wanted and more. the part with zitao left me with so much feels, like, zitao you deserve so much more TTATT
but I just love the whole fic all in all. you write the characters so well and the plot was well thought out. I love you it all!!! just!!!! I!!!!! love!!! it!!! so!!!!!! much!!!!!! I can't give you those well written meaningful comment but GOD I just love you so os much right now author-nim TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
thank you so much for reading! I honestly wasn't sure if anyone was going to bother reading all the way to the end so I'm so happy you liked it!! ^.^ Action-y aus are the best sometimes. And i know! I felt so bad for Zitao when I was writing it, too. Poor guy. Aww, your comment is plenty meaningful to me! Yay!
"I honestly wasn't sure if anyone was going to bother reading all the way to the end" aRE YOU KIDDING ME RN the story and jongdae's character really sucks you into reading it. it actually felt short tbh ;;;
And i know! I felt so bad for Zitao when I was writing it, too. Poor guy. poor bby. do you know he's my UB? so throughout the whole thing with him I was just kind of nooooooooo, you know? ^^;;;; you wrote him so deeply and with so much feels I- ewhjgifknlwbjhwfe the only basic comfort was that jongdae wasn't an asshole to him because if he was I would have just walked away from this fic XD and another comfort was that kyungsoo's his bodyguard and always has his back~~~~ awwww 93-liners <3 <3 *bodyguard, like, guard of tao's body right? kkyyaaa *winkwink nudgenudge hehe*
but DANG that part when jongdae first meets zitao. that thing he did? like that thing where he knew exactly what tao wanted? DAAAAAAAMMMMNNN BOY YOU HAD HIM HOOK LINE AND SINKER. I love that part so so much bc it showed how good jongdae is at his job. you
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OH MY GOD THIS WAS SO AMAZING i would love to leave a more coherent comment bUT I'M JUST SO I'M SO WHAT jesus christ hOW this is amazing i love every single bit of this and i might come back to leave a longer comment on this but for nOW /SHOVES ALL MY AFFECTION AT YOU WOW THIS ENTIRE FIC i was so into this from beginning to end and your writing is just great and your characters so fantastic and the whole plot was jusT oh my god i'm so incoherent but in a good way because this was just so fantastic and wow
/takes all your affection and shoves it in a box so I can look at it when I feel sad (: thanks for reading and liking it! Good incoherency is the best kind of incoherency!
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okay you have NO idea how long I've been waiting for an action-y au and DAMN this is everything I've wanted and more. the part with zitao left me with so much feels, like, zitao you deserve so much more TTATT
but I just love the whole fic all in all. you write the characters so well and the plot was well thought out. I love you it all!!! just!!!! I!!!!! love!!! it!!! so!!!!!! much!!!!!! I can't give you those well written meaningful comment but GOD I just love you so os much right now author-nim TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
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And i know! I felt so bad for Zitao when I was writing it, too. Poor guy. poor bby. do you know he's my UB? so throughout the whole thing with him I was just kind of nooooooooo, you know? ^^;;;;
you wrote him so deeply and with so much feels I- ewhjgifknlwbjhwfe
the only basic comfort was that jongdae wasn't an asshole to him because if he was I would have just walked away from this fic XD and another comfort was that kyungsoo's his bodyguard and always has his back~~~~ awwww 93-liners <3 <3 *bodyguard, like, guard of tao's body right? kkyyaaa *winkwink nudgenudge hehe*
but DANG that part when jongdae first meets zitao. that thing he did? like that thing where he knew exactly what tao wanted? DAAAAAAAMMMMNNN BOY YOU HAD HIM HOOK LINE AND SINKER. I love that part so so much bc it showed how good jongdae is at his job. you ( ... )
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i would love to leave a more coherent comment bUT I'M JUST SO
I'M SO
WHAT
jesus christ hOW this is amazing i love every single bit of this and i might come back to leave a longer comment on this but for nOW
/SHOVES ALL MY AFFECTION AT YOU WOW THIS ENTIRE FIC
i was so into this from beginning to end and your writing is just great and your characters so fantastic and the whole plot was jusT
oh my god
i'm so incoherent but in a good way because this was just so fantastic and
wow
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thanks for reading and liking it! Good incoherency is the best kind of incoherency!
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THERE ARE APPROXIMATELY N O WOR DS
Well maybe one
H O W
/lies down for a century
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this is so so good akoajsskd;AAA;;a
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