Shadowplay (2/2)

[ceruleanlight]

Comments

[julyfix]

this was BEAUTIFUL. i knew from the beginning that either jongin or sehun would be the "ghost", although i cant help but feel strongly for the metaphor about jongin being so closely tied to the park. i think, abstractly, he could have been a ghost or even a nymph, a creature that didn't fit in or coform with humans - invisible as the breeze. and how he made the connections of him not fitting in with the city, in my mind, perhaps jongin died and was reincarnated as some sort of guardian fairy to tend to the escape he wished he had when he was alive. perhaps he committed suicide too? ahhh, this is just a lovely piece and i like the way it made my mind work. thank you for writing and sharing ♥

[ceruleanlight]

thank you so much for reading! Even when I was writing it, I wasn't sure entirely what Jongin was, but he definitely was some sort of not-quite-real being, too beautiful to survive in the real world. I love hearing that my writing makes people think even a little bit so tysm! <3

[chenshines]

sPOT BC I NEED A MOMENT

[chenshines]

I seriously have nothing to say. im speechless to say the least and i can only conjure up one word to describe this, god this is beautiful. and i can somehow relate to jongin, even though im not completely sure what he is. im that girl noone sees and bothers so you could say im invisible in a way and the flowers, nature in general, the heavens know how much i love nature and jongin here is just- Ugh i cant conjure up anything more. thank you for writing and sharing your wonderful work.

and lol why did i even use a spot when im gonna comment a few minutes later ///rolls away

[ceruleanlight]

awww, thank you! I definitely understand, I think nearly everyone feels invisible in a way, just with Jongin it's a bit more literal than the rest of us. oh, god, I could write pages and pages about the way nature makes me feel, so that's probably why I liked writing this fic so much. (:

[liberosis]

holy shit. that was an incredible reading experience

[ceruleanlight]

Wow, thank you so much! yeah, I really liked writing Jongin's character in this one, he was so fragile and so bright all at the same time. I just went and looked up those comics and whoa, I can definitely see a lot of this Jongin in plant boy. (: go ahead and hate Sehun I authorize it because aren't there lots of quotes out there about how thin the line is between love and hate? (; I'm so glad you liked this! Hearts all around!

[chnyls]

i am very literally falling in love with you everything you write is so unique and wonderful and i love it so so so sososoososososoosooooo much arrghh
in my head kai did exist at some point but be was murdered and his body was hidden in the park (is it obvious ive been reading too much manga?) so he's tied to that place until its gone.
this is so perfect and i am so crey

[ceruleanlight]

ahhhhh, stahp, you're making me feel all the warm, fuzzy feels! ahaha, what are stories with misty storylines for if not for you to decide how the characters ended up where they did? (there is such a thing as too much manga? oh no, this bodes ill for my future...) thank you so much! (:

[chnyls]

i will tell you all the wonderful ego inflating things until you vomit rainbows. only then will my mission be accomplished.
(lmao as if there's such a thing as too much manga i was just reading too much stuff by clamp while hiding in a library)

[ceruleanlight]

nooooooo why do you do this to me?! what if I was allergic to rainbows and happiness and stuff like that then what would you do, huh? haaa well libraries are the best places to hide out and read manga anyway not that I speak from experience

[yiyul]

no shadow played anything in this, did it...

[ceruleanlight]

maybe you're just not looking hard enough... ;) but what, do I look like one of those people who are creative and dedicated enough to use titles that actually have to do with the story? Don't let's be silly.