THE ISLAND

[cereswunderkind]

Here's a short extract from THE ISLAND, one of my contributions to THE LAST POST:

"So most days it’s just Rory, me and the Landie. I fill it up every week or two at Jas Stewart’s pump by the lifeboat launching ramp in the port and don’t tap the red oil in the heating tank. After all, when it comes to it, I’d rather keep warm than mobile. The croft

Comments

[ghostfriendly]

This one was written with excellent realism; the events were prosaic but ambiguous enough that I was just waiting for the twist.

[cereswunderkind]

Thank you. It's always nice to get generous feedback. Only one thing, though... there is no twist!!! Everything that happens in the story happens in the story, whether it be contradictory or not. There is no ambiguity. - none intended, anyway.