Bleach - Beyond Expectation

May 04, 2008 21:49

Fandom: Bleach
Title: Beyond Expectation
Pairing: Ichigo/Rukia
Rating: PG - 15
Summary: In a world torn apart by war, everyone tried to settle into the remnants of the tragedy. Humans and shinigamis alike were returning to their origins. Can the two people who had seen everything to the end, find a happy ending in between?

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hopeles_fancies May 4 2008, 15:04:22 UTC
that was so good! it was so sad though! i still loved it though...and as for the happy ending, i think it was happy enough!

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ceres_wish May 4 2008, 16:12:46 UTC
Thanks so much for taking the time to review!

It was indeed sad, though i hope the ending justify it. I'm glad you think it was happy enough ^^

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ana_leez May 4 2008, 17:14:39 UTC
You write really well! It was really sad but in a good way :) I love all your descriptions. good job ^u^

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ceres_wish May 4 2008, 17:31:09 UTC
Thank you so much for commenting!

I try to put some light into their suffering, i'm glad it worked out well ^^

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gully_moe May 4 2008, 17:39:22 UTC
I loved it, it was very sweet.

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ceres_wish May 4 2008, 17:54:17 UTC
Thank you, i'm really glad you like it ^^

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ceres_wish May 5 2008, 05:25:17 UTC
Thanks for commenting!! I tried to give their emotions a balance, and i'm glad you like it ^______^

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annieroo2 May 5 2008, 04:39:31 UTC
Simply lovely, but terribly heart breaking. Very tense, very emotional and very real feeling.

Honestly I think it is very close to what we will see happen at the end of the manga. With the exception of the kiss. I don't really see that happening in a shounen manga.

On my more optimistic days I think Ichigo and Rukia really will have a emotional and heart breaking separation at the end of the manga. But with a little hope of being together again when Ichigo does die for real.

Of course on my more pessimistic days I pretty much see one of both dying in each others arms. So, yeah. I much prefer your version. :D

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ceres_wish May 5 2008, 05:32:01 UTC
Indeed, i tried to visualise what will happen in the end, if both of them were to survive. And i don't see the kiss happening either, to be honest, Kubo doesn't seem interested in inserting any romance in the story, since Ichigo have never shown anything exceeding freindship towards Rukia or Inoue.

And thanks so much for taking the time to comment, it meant a lot to me ^_______^

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