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Ficlet: Clear As Broken Ice (Prison Break)

Jul 20, 2008 00:20

Pairing: Alex Mahone/Michael Scofield/Paul Kellerman
Rating: NC-17
Notes: Written for the Porn Battle. Prompt: precarious.
Disclaimer: These characters aren't mine.

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prison break: mahone/scofield/kellerman, prison break, ficlet, threesome

Comments 8

dodificus July 20 2008, 06:00:40 UTC

“You’re still wet,” says Scofield, hoarse, almost a whisper in Mahone’s ear. “From last night.”

gah. So hot.

“Awesome,” says Kellerman. “Could we pay attention to me now?”

And funny as well:)

I did have to go look up who Kellerman was though, I'd totally forgotten his name. It works though:)

cerebel July 20 2008, 14:58:00 UTC

That part, that line, was what gave me the entire idea for this ficlet.

And lol, Kellerman's voice was hilarious to write. I was expecting him to be difficult, but he snarked like there was no tomorrow, and it was quite fun.

I'm glad you liked ^_^

junalele July 20 2008, 08:03:04 UTC

Ooooh. Me likes.

Funnily enough I never thought about those three. No idea why not because duh, hot. And I like the fact that you make Michael and Kellerman gang up on Mahone. And not Kellerman and Mahone on Michael. Heh.

cerebel July 20 2008, 15:22:59 UTC

That's kind of a problem I have with a lot of Prison Break fics I've read (granted, I haven't read that many, because I am an admitted spoilerphobe). So many seem to have another character sexually gang up on Michael just because he's pretty -_-

It's true, though. These guys are a pretty unlikely threesome. But fun to write. I'm glad you liked :)

junalele July 20 2008, 20:11:56 UTC

I see your point. I think it very much depends on the other character involved and most of all on where he is on the journey. Without giving away anything spoilery - there are a few points, okay many points, where I feel he is so vulnerable that he wouldn't be able to put up much of a fight.

Fun to read, too. heh.

niektete July 20 2008, 23:46:08 UTC

“Awesome,” says Kellerman. “Could we pay attention to me now?” So awesome, and so what Kellerman would say XD

Oh, and the hotness was incredible. You're contributing to global warming here :P

cerebel July 21 2008, 03:29:45 UTC

Man, I loved writing Kellerman's voice. He came out a lot more sarcastic than I was expecting.

LOL. Well, thank you ^_^

pamalax July 22 2008, 18:30:45 UTC

Very hot and VERY NICE!

Have to say I've very much enjoyed your battle posts here

If either of you ladies are willing and inspired I'd be THRILLED beyond reason to see a little Mahone/Burrows? Alpha male battle for dominace?

Please?
Perhaps this along with my icon will inspire ya?

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