Ficlet: The Moment Before (Jeremiah)

[cerebel]

Character: Smith
Rating: PG
Spoilers: through 2x01
Notes: Written for belleferret, to the prompt 'introspection'.

Comments

[belleferret]

Oh Cerebel, this is wonderful. Of course Smith would worry and wonder about the upcoming meeting--God never gives him quite enough information. I love his stray thoughts: the beauty of the scene, the helicopters, rock skipping.

You really should write more Smith, you do it beautifully.

Thank you for this little ficlet!

[cerebel]

Thank you! I know, I could see him obsessing over the details, in a quiet, placid sort of way.

I really enjoy writing him, too. I'm not sure I ever got to my best fic-writing comfort zone where Jeremiah is concerned; rewatching second season will probably help with that ^_^

You're welcome :)

[cookiefleck]

Love it! It never occurred to me to wonder what was going through his mind prior to his first meeting with Kurdy. Your fic will ehance my enjoyment if I rewatch. Thanks!

[cerebel]

I didn't really occur to me either, until I rewatched the episode ^^ I'm glad you liked :)

[addie71]

Oh, very nice. It had never occured to me to wonder about Smith's thoughts when meeting someone new.

[cerebel]

Hadn't occurred to me either, until the second time watching that episode :P Thank you ^_^

[julchen11]

Simply excellent! Thank you, dear!

[cerebel]

You're welcome ^^ I'm glad you liked :)

[prisca1960]

I have read this ficlet in belleferrets LJ - and I think, it´s really good.

So I read your other Jeremiah Stories too. I really hope, you would write more like this, especially with Mr. Smith in it!

[cerebel]

Thanks! I appreciate that ~_^ And I plan to, we'll see how it goes :)