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Fic: Illumination In Unnatural Light (Heroes)

Aug 24, 2007 20:27

The phone’s ring is shrill. Shrill enough to curdle milk. Shrill enough to shatter glass. Shrill enough to shatter all of Dr. Mohinder Suresh’s hopes for the Third Floor Improvement Campaign, which began this week with the replacement of all the old-style phones in the office.

Mohinder winces at the tone. He’s going to have to surreptitiously ( Read more... )

au, heroes: mohinder/sylar, heroes

Comments 48

rap541 August 25 2007, 01:53:35 UTC

This is nice.

However it is NOT tarty lixcest! >:(

cerebel August 25 2007, 03:14:14 UTC

Well, it's been lurking on my computer for a while, and I wanted to finish it. :P

bloody_beary August 25 2007, 02:21:27 UTC

O.O

Wonderful!!Love how Mohinder and Sylar connected so well that it was extremely easy for Mohinder to join him.Also loved the fact that Sylar killing his father didn't change much,other than providing a little more resistance time.All in all,a geat fic!

Even though it would be interesting to see where it went from there,i'm not going to ask for a sequel.I think you have enough on your plate as it is.But,I will ask when the next Gravity will be coming,if that's okay.

*gives basket of chocolate candy as reward and leverage in one*^_^'

cerebel August 25 2007, 03:17:27 UTC

There's something about these two - that they can have a weird, twisted, emotional relationship, hate each other, and still need each other.

Yeah, this one's going to be a one-shot. This is one case where I think the ending speaks on its own, without a sequel.

Gravity's coming along. I like to take a little more time with it than with my other stuff :P

Yay chocolate! :) I'm glad you liked ^_^

louiex August 25 2007, 02:25:41 UTC

Amazing~ I'm speechless right now and need to reread it another dozen times or so!

cerebel August 25 2007, 03:17:41 UTC

LOL. Thank you! I'm glad you liked :)

oscargirl08 August 25 2007, 02:25:49 UTC

Whoo. Sylar is crazy as hell. ('Cause in the show he was perfectly sane, right?)

I like this! You've worked your magic again ficmaster!

cerebel August 25 2007, 03:18:04 UTC

100% sane. Totally.

Well, thank you :P I'm glad you liked!

vanitashaze August 25 2007, 02:31:19 UTC

"Soon love soon", indeed. It's a good song for Heroes.

What can I say? Once again, you hit the proverbial fucked-up nail on the head. The spacing in this hits exactly where it should; prose cut with the precision of a filmmaker. Very nice. As usual, impeccable language, clean lines, amazing characterization... Sylar hits especially well. Mohinder-as-psychologist is a little harder of a sell; like Sylar, he's rather passionate about what he believes in--clinical detatchment is not something he appears to practice well--but I think you puled it off. Everything else... the killing-cat curiousity; the confidence that he can deal with anything the world throws at him, alone; the initial denial... everything else blends impeccably into Mohinder's personality.

I like the fact that, though AU, there's enough canon in it to be completely believable. The little homages to geneticist-Mohinder's storyline--the computer file he decides not to delete, Eden, the chai--are an especially nice touch. You get a sense of well-mixed could-have-been ( ... )

cerebel August 25 2007, 03:47:20 UTC

I love that song. I keep going back to Vienna Teng for titles -_-

Well, thank you! Sylar is pretty much the same psychotic he is in the show. As for Mohinder, I don't think psychologists should necessarily be detached from their patients - it's a kind of medicine that requires a strong connection between patient and doctor for it to work - that's what I saw in it.

Killing-cat curiosity indeed :P

I'm glad you liked! ^_^