Midgar Burning - Chapter 24

[calvi_sama]

Title:  Midgar Burning
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Comments

[fringeperson]

Well it's all just gone to pot, hasn't it yo?
Least Cid's out of it, kinda. Think he should have shot Scarlet while he had a chance though.

[bronco_down]

I wish he could have! And he's not out of it just yet, unless you want to pull the "out of the frying pan and into the fire" line.

[fringeperson]

ooh... ouch.
damn yo. Guy can't just get a break in his life that isn't a bone?

[silk_weaver]

Well, it's been a while since I've given you two a comment, huh? I'm really sorry about that. Life and RP have been absolutely eating up my time. I'll try to be better about it, of course, but I can't really make promises

[bronco_down]

I think it definitely should have felt OOC- they're clinging to each other in desperation and only being more self-destructive while they do it. I'll admit we got carried away by our desire to see them together, but I promise it almost always ties into the situation and the plot. There's another (enormous) digression from the plot headed your way, I'm afraid, but we'd been thinking of trimming that part down from the day we moved back to plot. In light of your comment (for which we are very grateful, as usual!), I think we'll have to. Sometimes we forget that the majority of our readers actually pay attention for the plot and not the fluffy stuff, and sometimes while we're writing we just plain forget we have readers.

But we're very glad that you're not afraid to point out things like this to us- though I think you did sugarcoat a little, didn't you? ;)- and we promise it'll be worth it to stick with reading.

I'd go poke you on AIM now, but unfortunately I have to poof away to finish that paper I should be working on right now >.>

[bronco_down]

** Oh, and I...didn't expect Cid to quit the force either. He decided to spring that on me and I nearly strangled him.

[beruthiels_cats]

*cringes* Ooooohhh shiiiiiiiitttttttttt. Yo.

[calvi_sama]

Honey, you have no idea.