Parker's my favorite, and I love it when she does things that make it clear that she thinks of the team as her family--even if she doesn't realize she thinks of them that way. :)
Oh this is gave me shivers. :-) Really well done - loved Eliot's POV of it all, and Parker dragging him out and the discussion about pancakes (how could anyone *not* eat soggy pancakes, is what I wanna know!)
Beautiful! You really captured the team's whole family dynamic, and I loved their voices in this.
Although, I gotta tell ya, from the summary you had me looking everywhere for warnings - I was like, nuh-uh, I am not reading this if Eliot gets killed ded. Glad I took the risk.
*grins* Good to see you writing for this fandom. I'm so used to seeing your s/n around VMars fics, I had to do a double-take or two to make sure I saw right. ;D
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Thanks for commmenting!
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Thanks for commenting--I'm glad you liked it!
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Although, I gotta tell ya, from the summary you had me looking everywhere for warnings - I was like, nuh-uh, I am not reading this if Eliot gets killed ded. Glad I took the risk.
*grins* Good to see you writing for this fandom. I'm so used to seeing your s/n around VMars fics, I had to do a double-take or two to make sure I saw right. ;D
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It's so hard to write summaries that are accurate but don't give anything important away! I'm glad you took a shot.
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