Comments | cellshader: Every Step to the Daylight (3:10 to Yuma fic)

cellshader

Every Step to the Daylight (3:10 to Yuma fic)

Aug 26, 2011 21:20

title: Every Step to the Daylight
fandom: 3:10 to Yuma (2007)
rating: PG-13
word count: 1,307
warnings: violence, language, murder
disclaimer: I own nothing. Beta’d by shaneworshipsu2.
summary: They have been in the same town too long. But Ben never listens to Charlie Prince.

( Ben doesn’t use his words, which means that he’s a little drunk )

fic: 3:10 to yuma, fic

Comments 5

frankenshane August 27 2011, 03:40:04 UTC

Hurrah! I love it, omg.

cellshader August 29 2011, 04:46:58 UTC

Haha, thank you! I always love giving you more Charlie and Ben action ;)

(And thank you for the advice. I think this piece really needed that!)

frankenshane August 30 2011, 06:34:40 UTC

You're welcome! AND I CAN NEVER GET ENOUGH OF THEM, NOT GONNA LIE.

(Not a problem, I love helping.)

levitatethis August 27 2011, 14:19:47 UTC

You already know my thoughts on this, but let me say it again -- this is such a good story! Not only did you capture Charlie really well, but his dynamic with Ben is totally on point. I dig the observational edge to this with Charlie analyzing everything and how his emotions are all tied up in it.

Have you written more for "3:10 To Yuma" because I'd love to read it!

Icon is only related by virtue of being another awesome western :-)

cellshader August 29 2011, 04:54:25 UTC

Thank you! It honestly makes my night to hear how much you enjoyed this. I have a very, very deep place in my heart for Charlie Prince, so hearing that I handle him well as a character is very gratifying. :)

I have written two pieces in the past. One was an awful view of Charlie in hell without Ben. One was Charlie masturbating when they stop to camp one night. Both were victims of the slash clean-up two years ago, so they are literally gone.

But it is more than likely that I will be writing another one in the future. I can't leave Charlie be, and I know now there are people that will enjoy it. :)

(and your icon! I love it!)