Settle the Score (5/?)

Jul 16, 2010 01:05

Title: Settle the Score (5/?)
Author: cellochick92 
Rating: Maybe R? 
Word Count: 1334
Warning: Indirect account/discussion of abuse.
Disclaimer:  Nothing is mine =(
Summary: For xrainingsorrowx ’s prompt over at the rq_angst meme.  “Quinn abused Rachel for so long, so she feels it's okay if Rachel returns the favor.”

A/N:  Stupid need for character reflection and internal ( Read more... )

fic: settle the score, rachel/quinn

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xrainingsorrowx July 16 2010, 07:53:03 UTC
I was about to go to bed, and then I saw this. Then I was all like "Yeah! Update!" This chapter was two words, fucking awesome. :D I really liked how Rachel truly saw how much she damaged Quinn, and how that damage isn't going to be easy to repair. I can't wait for another update!

P.S.- For the wonderful-ness of this chapter you get homemade virtual cookies! :o

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xrainingsorrowx July 16 2010, 07:56:40 UTC
OH YEAH! This --> Mentally crossing her fingers, she prayed that her nightmares would stay away long enough for her to get at least a few minutes of peaceful sleep, so she could pretend that things with Rachel were going to stay better forever.

Broke. My. Heart. (Just sayin'.)

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cellochick92 July 16 2010, 17:08:51 UTC
*nomnomnom* Yay for cookies!!

Glad you liked it! I was going to just go to bed, but then i realized it was my first night with a computer in three days, and i desperately needed to take advantage of it and post something...so good for us and not getting any sleep! =D

And oops. I hope it's not broken permanently, lol? ;)

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xrainingsorrowx July 16 2010, 17:36:07 UTC
Lol I'm glad you enjoyed the cookies (I personally think they're better than Rachel's 'I'm Sorry' cookies... Not to toot my own horn but.. "TOOT TOOT!"):D

I'm sure my heart will heal rather nicely. You know, when Quinn stops being all battered, bruised and afraid (even though I <3 the angst there is something so heartbreaking about Fragile!Quinn.)

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dreamupfalldown July 16 2010, 08:31:01 UTC
oh my goodness! This chapter was simply heart-breaking. Rachel better not be incorrigible is all I really hafta say though, otherwise my heart will surely shatter.

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cellochick92 July 16 2010, 17:10:21 UTC
No worries, it's going to get better =) I stupidly promised a happyish ending, so now, while there will be moments of awfulness, im trying to at least scale back the awful!

Thanks for the comment! =)

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cellochick92 July 16 2010, 17:11:13 UTC
Aww you're making me blush! ;) I'm glad you liked it though, thanks for the comment! =D

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silentinformer July 16 2010, 11:08:21 UTC
ooh what a wonderful way to start the morning. I really liked this chapter and your emphasis on the fact that outside help will be needed to solve their problems. Poor Quinn and her awful parents, I'm glad at least that Rachel realizes the damage that is being done to her significant other, whether it be by her hand or the neglect of her parents.

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silentinformer July 16 2010, 16:50:19 UTC
also every song I listen to these days makes me think of this fic. Today its ex-factor by lauren hill lol its a self destructive relationship song

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cellochick92 July 16 2010, 17:14:42 UTC
Hahaha yesssss. I do the same thing...not specifically with this fic, but every song nowadays i end up thinking, "Wow. This would be an awesome/heartbreaking fic!" XD

I'm glad you like the direction that it's going...and yes. While you could argue otherwise based on her recent behavior, rachel isn't entirely stupid, so hopefully now that she's pulled her head out of the sand she can focus all of her energy on productive ways to fix things (namely Quinn!)

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mynamesalicia2 July 16 2010, 15:45:16 UTC
ok, so i just caught up with the other 4 chapters and this... my heart is breaking =( this is so good, in a sad way

cannot wait for moree

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cellochick92 July 16 2010, 17:15:52 UTC
Awww, well, I'm glad you like it, and hopefully things will get better in the next chap or two so you can piece your heart back together! =) Thanks for the comment!

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