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Broken Hallelujah (1/1)

Jul 16, 2011 22:22

Title: Broken Hallelujah
Author: cellochick92
Rating: PG? Ish?
Disclaimer: Not mine. Tragically.
Words: 1366
Summary: I think there was a prompt somewhere at one point in time about doing a song fic based on “Hallelujah”. So. Here's some angst with happy Faberry endings in a convenient little one-shot form! =)
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rachel/quinn, fanfic

Comments 5

ayden07 July 17 2011, 06:07:07 UTC

I have a couple of different thoughts after reading this:

First, I wish they would write this for the show. I love Faberry, and even if it wasnt romantic!Faberry, at least they could give us some Faberry Friendship and actually give Quinn a real friend.

Second, you captured my life in this Quinn.It always looks easier to drive people away than to wait for them to leave you. It doesnt hurt any less, but you fall into the theory and then you just accept it. The only sad part is that my Rachel wants to stick by me, but she wont ever love me.Im glad Rachel felt the same way for Quinn.

Third, this is just a great piece of writing! =)

malexfaith July 17 2011, 11:10:05 UTC

Awesome writing. The originality is amazing. The depth of Quinn was great to see. Not a fan of sadness or pain but you captured the rawness perfectly. Thanks heaps for sharing

mjacton July 17 2011, 18:13:11 UTC

Rachel and Quinn are meant for each other...of course!

They just have to realize it.

Also, Leonard Cohen is my favorite, but these are good. :)

diandraminas July 17 2011, 23:24:04 UTC

You did an amazing job, I for one can't get enough of that song (like hearing over and over again)the same goes to faberry
I love it

miss_darkmoon July 24 2011, 07:24:07 UTC

That was raw and absolutely gorgeous. Wow.

All she had learned from love was how to hurt other people, and if that was what love was about then she didn't want any part of it.

Not one single person had ever seemed to grasp the magnitude of the words or how much they meant to her. In her long line of friendships and relationships, she couldn't think of a single instance where love had ended well for her.

... like, wow. What an amazing look into Quinn. I wish they would do that much in the show (or admit that her obsession with dating Finn to get prom queen was a result of her repressing her real sexuality so much).

Like, the depth you brought to the character in this way was amazing, and I just loved the end with Rachel. Of course she got it. And Rachel, "I'll never be done with you"... guh.

Thanks for sharing!! :D (and for the new versions of this amazing song! :D)