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celestialraine

SMAP Fic: Half-Life

Sep 13, 2012 12:44

This has been sleeping in my laptop ever since late last year but I wasn't able to post it. This is actually a kind of reverse fic for: One song, Five Hearts and at the same time a song fic based on Boku no Hanbun. I have been planing to post it but well, it's now Gift of SMAP and still I haven't posted it *shot*. Niweiz, here it is :)

Title: Half ( Read more... )

fic, smap, fanfic, songifc

Comments 6

ngoilan September 13 2012, 15:55:58 UTC

Love this! Love the half of me theme and the ending is just perfect, though I wish there was more TakuGoro as you know I ship them hard. I got a little confused in the middle about who was being talked about but I think that might just be me.

Don't know when you had time for this and am so sorry that you are sick. Hope you're better soon. Will try and answer you mail soon, too!

But thanks for writing this. Really cannot get too much member love and using the song as inspiration is just genius!

celestialraine October 14 2012, 15:42:02 UTC

I wrote it last december when I got the cd and could not stop listening to the song. But I didn't get to post it then. I'm mapping out some fics right now and one of them is TakuGoro ^_^ thanks to the boys' answer to Feeling 5.

The fic is kinda messed up here cause it doesn't show when the perspective changes. It was font color coded in my laptop but here I just turned it back to black. Will fix this once lj stopped acting weird.. lol

miss you girl and thanks for your warm comments!!! :)

dancing_donut November 12 2012, 17:01:27 UTC

stumbled upon this and URGH why? I am so much in awe w/ the one sided-love/feelings from all the members. The I want more but I can't say it 'cause you won't go w/ it feel. I love how very stream-of-consciousness this is where thoughts just continue to flow from one after another.

I enjoy it immensely!

celestialraine November 17 2012, 19:50:54 UTC

*hugs* thanks for the review. somehow the song, plus the poster that came with the cd, not to mention their performances makes you think, "hey, what if they are singing it for that "other half"?", and just because the group has this cute and complicated relationship among the members, it just feels perfect. Thanks again, reading your review made my morning! :)

tsuristyle May 29 2013, 06:30:09 UTC

Aww ;-; So much one-sided love, leaving me heartbroken... Especially Tsuyoshi longing after Nakai! I love how you used that story of Tsuyoshi saying he wants to be with Nakai personally :3

(But who is Goro's other half? Or is he the only one that's whole? XD)

celestialraine June 18 2013, 02:26:43 UTC

waaahhh so sorry it took me long to reply, i don't have net at home. Thanks so much for you reviews!!! *hug*

The Nakai-Tsuyoshi story during the MIJ concert really tickles me and I see it as a very, very cute scene, and Tsu's reaction was soo cute so I felt that I really have to write something about it.

I know Tsu is Shingo's best friend, but somehow he's close to Nakai right? It might be due to their being part of Ii tomo, but I dunno, they look comfy with each other (as further evidenced by the five member trip, esp the karaoke parts)

I really have no idea who's Goro-chan's other half. I was thinking it could be Kimura since they're close, but I just can't fit it in the story, and well, since I still had a hung over from the MIJ MC at that time, I think I got stuck to Goro being bullied.

But yeah, maybe he's the only one that's whole, lucky Poodle-mermaid-prince! :3