Assent (4/?)

Sep 14, 2009 03:28

Title: Assent (4/?)
Pairing: Sylar/Claire
Word Count: 2858
Rating: R for language and violent imagery (future chapters will be rated M)
Warning(s): I don't own Heroes. Spoilers through end of Season 3 to be on the safe side. Future-fic, technically.

Chapter 4 )

fanfic: sylar/claire

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elliesmeow September 15 2009, 04:20:56 UTC
I liked the conversation Claire and Sylar had about regrets and motivations. I liked the distinctions that were made. Very interesting and true to character for them both.

If Noah is getting a lot of blame for this then where were Angela and Peter? Shouldn't they shoulder a bit of blame too?

Poor Claire. And poor Sylar knowing all these things. Sometimes it's pretty tough to take the knowledge of terrible things done when you are also forced to accept you are helpless to change what is in the past.

Thanks for the new chapter. Can't wait to read more.

-Ellie

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celestegrey September 15 2009, 05:33:41 UTC
Hi Ellie,

You are one of the first people to comment and actually ask me something. I've been waiting for that.

This story is still in development for me. I had a basic idea and started with that, I know where I want to go but to be honest I haven't settled on Angela's fate. I thought about just having her dead already (old age?) but I keep going back and forth.

As far as Peter...let's just say he will make an appearance on the down the road...

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elliesmeow September 15 2009, 05:54:21 UTC
Cool, it's good to let the muse go where she will. Long as she doesn't dig in her heels and refuse to go anywhere at all.;)

Looking forward to future chapters no matter what you decide to do.

-Ellie

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