Love it when You Cry

[ceeebee]

Title: Love it when You Cry
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Also written here, unedited, on KMM.
“Merlin, why are you crying?” Arthur whispered, “did... did I... are you hurt?” he asked, uncertainly, crawling forwards slowly, eyes sweeping over Merlin’s gorgeous body, resting on the way his lips trembled, as he gasped.

Comments

[brunettepet]

Arthur's pulling away was just what Merlin feared, but I love that he's immediately pulled back in, needing to console and understand his boyfriend's reaction. I can see how the crying would be disconcerting, but your lover being overcome with emotion during sex is a good thing, right? Arthur being able to adjust and coming to love the reaction is great.

[ceeebee]

thanks for commenting :) This is basically what I was trying to get across... that this is something Merlin doesn't like about himself, but Arthur will basically do anything for him and, by the end, has learnt to love this about Merlin. It's hard at first though, because Arthur doesn't realise Merlin's crying means he's having a good time xD

[owensheart]

I can immagine Arhtur'd be shocked by Merlin crying but I am glad he accepts it.

Great story.

[ceeebee]

Thank you! Glad you liked it :)

[k_nightfox]

Love this! As someone who occaisonally (not every time) cries with an orgasm I can tell you it really does freak out your partner the first time they see it! The good ones get over it. Arthur is clearly one of the good ones ;-) Great job on this!

[ceeebee]

haha! Yes, he is <3 Thanks for commenting :)
(I adore your icon, btw)

[bumerbmw]

this was beautiful.
Arthur is just one of a kind so is merlin! :)

[ceeebee]

They most definitely are :D
Thank you :)

[gwylliondream]

Oooh, this was awesome! I love how Merlin got so very overcome with emotion. So intimate. I think Arthur will be okay with it.

[ceeebee]

Thank you! I'm pretty sure he'll be great with it :D