[gardener] First day stomach jitters

Nov 13, 2009 12:57

Title: First Day Stomach Jitters
ID: gardener
Word count: 5524
Rating/Warnings: PG-13/language
Character(s) or pairing(s): Tsuna, Shouichi, Squalo, Bel, Dino, Ryohei, Gokudera, Giannini, Bianchi, Hibari
Theme challenge: YES

FIRST DAY STOMACH JITTERS. )

round 3

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anonymous November 17 2009, 11:01:26 UTC
ROFLMAO

That was FABULOUS. I love how you made the roles work for each character. Hibari the homicidal zookeeper is very amusing to see, though I'd have to say that Squalo and Bel were my favorite parts. ...Now I can't stop imagining the weather porn ;)

[bookseller]

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dame_batsie December 28 2009, 18:06:01 UTC
Awwww, thanks. It was my beta who suggested that Hibari get into trouble so it was thanks to her that he become a little too violent. XD

Ha ha, can't go wrong with Squalo and Bel and crack. Sorry to put the weather porn image in your head. or am I? :P

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shinigami39 December 29 2009, 14:04:34 UTC
I was about to scream about how I haven't commented on this, but then I realized that I was anon LOL I've read it again and it's still so hilariously funny ♥♥♥

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dame_batsie December 29 2009, 17:19:25 UTC
I was about to scream about how I haven't commented on this, but then I realized that I was anon
Ha ha, I felt the same way when I poked around here yesterday to comment on other fics that I thought I hadn't commented, but it turned out that I already did so... yeah. XD

Thanks again for reading. <3

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makeste December 28 2009, 19:08:27 UTC
Now that the reveals have finally been posted, I can comment on this without giving myself away through my flailing and fangirling. XD

I loved this. ♥ Such a fun AU, and I adored your characterizations, especially Squalo and Bel. (And "Christ, we don’t want your weather porn," is possibly my new favorite quote of all time.)

And I actually did end up IDing you correctly, which surprised me, heh! I think it was the Squalo Herbal Essences thing that cinched it.

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dame_batsie December 28 2009, 20:40:39 UTC
LOL, I figured you'd ID me correctly. I knew I had mentioned something about Squalo and Kikyo and hair or whatever in the past to you. If it weren't for the pressures of time, I think I would've continued writing forever. There were just too many possibilities with this AU. XD

Thanks for the comment. *hugs*

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