"Meaning"

[ceathair]

Uchi meant well.

But Uchi wasn’t a cook because of his drama any more than Ryo was a doctor or social worker because  he played one on TV.

Koyama also meant well.

The mother hen of News had noticed that Ryo wasn’t really recovering from his last cold and was too tired to take care of himself. Koyama then told Shige who promptly

Comments

[araanaz9]

This, darling, is not what we call a drabble. XD

This was very cute. Characterization is worlds better than it used to be. ;D Getting the hang of it, aren't you? I do wish you'd take the time to edit just so I don't have to wonder how "an assistance" can apply something. But yeah...

Yay for bratty friends?

[ceathair]

Not a drabble? It's not even 2000 words!

Well, I don't really think that my characterisations is that much better or that I got the hang of it concerning RPF (dramas are another story since they're fictional and can't contraddict you too much XD) I just wanted to have at least one fic on jent today with Ryo that wasn't Ryoda or a bad Nishikato (Except the author trivalaffair, she doesn't count ;) since she can actually write ).

When have I ever been able to edit anything?

Love, your bratty friend.

[trivialaffair]

Why hello there :D. I'm sorry for peeking at the comment before me, but yes, this is hardly a drabble (and there are some editing issues-Osen's ratings WEREN'T that good, right?).

I love that Koyama asked Shige to ask Uchi who asked Yamapi to take care of Ryo. I'm totally loving their member ai. And yay for Ryo calling Uchi by first name XD (little things like that kill me).

And I just read over your comment (once again, sorry for being a creep) and ::blushing:: thanks for the compliment! I feel so special.

[ceathair]

Apparently I don't have the same definition of drabble as everyone else!! But I can't post anything under 1000 really...the shortest was 600 words and I really felt bad. I'm a more is better kinda gal XD.

I'll go correct the typo you mentionned but I can't edit my things properly, I just add more when I edit and forget to check the typos and spelling errors. I'm very blind when I correct (but I'm severly myopic too XD)

News member-ai is very sweet even if it's often very indirect even if they often *coughkoyama* proclaim it loud and proud for articles. In interviews they say the opposite !!! (like on Heyx3)

I like finding good authors so continue to write, (maybe on the plane? :D) Thank you for reviewing despite the typos. And especially for reviewing. It really means a lot.

[trivialaffair]

"More is better" is always good. I tend to get pretty wordy myself.

Hahaha yeah I'm pretty blind to the errors in my fic too. I'm sure I've missed tons of stuff.

Oh NEWS. Never leave me.

Of course I would review this. You've so lovingly reviewed mine, this is the least I could do :D. That, and I think you're awesome.

[ceathair]

<3

You're awesome tooo!!

[blufox_o7]

It took me a while to read this. Sry. I was busy from school and.. well, to be honest, it's kind of hard for me to read NEWS. ):

Anyway, I'll help you out a bit, okay? :)
-But Uchi wasn’t a cook because of his drama anymore that any more than Ryo was a doctor or social worker because he played one on TV..
-The mother hen of News had noticed had that Ryo wasn’t really recovering..
-it was almost as if Yamapi...
-"So.” Began Uchi starring staring at Ryo with curiosity.
- Uchi’s voice trembled loosing losing part of his control.

There. Others were just mostly comma problems so I won't point them out. I hope this wouldn't anger you or anything, I just wanna help out a bit.

Anyway, I really like it. I sort hoped I read this sooner. It was actually a nice read. I like how you somewhat used my plot bunny. I really do. Plus I looooooove how you added the fact that R liked being the only Johnny's in two groups. It's just so, idk, real for H to catch that. I mean, everytime I read his comments like that, I notice it but I try my best to

[ceathair]

Yay!!!

I wrote it for you so I'm glad you liked it!! I just had the plot bunny doing sommersaults in my head with the sentence "Uchi meant well but..." that I had to wake up at midnight and wrote until 1h30 just to get most of it out. I knew you wouldn't mind that I took that plot since...hey you got fic in return!!

My computer ate the final version, because I corrected the mistakes everyone mentioned but...they're still there! Though...the commas are because I'm french and we french people abuse of commas like an unsupervised child in front of a chocolate box XD!

I'll go correct the mistakes, I'm absolutely not mad since I know there are errors it's just that I'm often blind to them. That's why I can't correct my own things even if I try, and I do try to proofread because loads of errors are annoying. Your help is really appreciated!

Hope school is going(/ending?) well for you!

I ♥ you too for commenting! And because you're an awesome writer :D

[blufox_o7]

Thanks. :)

School is ending soon, I think.. I hope? Hahaha~ It's not tough, I just like pretending that it is. Because really, if I'm not pressured to study, I never will. ;_;

I fail when it comes to proofreading too. Since I have no beta, when I come back and reread my works, I flinch when I catch errors. It's hard to catch it when you're the one writing coz you know the "flow" of your story already. Since English isn't my first language, I know what you mean. :)

Hopefully your computer will stop eating your works in the future. :)

[ceathair]

I hope for you that school will end smoothly. Sometimes I miss school and I really want to go back but then I remember how I failed as a student and then I got to stop wishing for stuff to be different! I also have to be under pressure a lot to do things so I totally get that