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ceathair

Fic "For The Times That Has Yet To Come" P3

Oct 07, 2008 22:57

AU JE Fic "For The Times That Has Yet To Come"
Part 3
Dedicated to kriszeth for the support!
Note- Unbeta'd as of now.

( There were so many things to do and yet, the hardest decisions weren't taken. )

characterization needs major work, je fic, ryo&uchi&ohkura, for the times that has yet to come

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kriszeth October 8 2008, 14:03:21 UTC

FIRST!
*skips off to read*

kriszeth October 8 2008, 14:13:43 UTC

i woke up early just to read this. also Dedicated to Kriszeth for the support!
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ceathair October 9 2008, 04:37:37 UTC

Gosh, you're soooo cute to say that!!!!

You didn't have to wake up early (plus I'm two hours ahead of you!!)

I've started part 4...should be posted tomorow. XD

And you really supported me, so the least I could do was to say it. I wrote nearly 2000 words for that chapter alone because I was inspired.

praghufanfic October 9 2008, 04:41:58 UTC

Omg, this was amazing! My heart was aching for poor Ryo when he was thinking of everyone and how even OSAKA had gone dead, and *FLAILS* this was amazing!

ceathair October 9 2008, 04:48:59 UTC

Thank you!!!! Glad you also enjoyed this part! I'm testing the waters by posting FO at first and so far the response had been really great. I really want to post as much as I can before my vacation next week. But so far, i've been writing everyday, so it's been good.

epicwaters October 11 2008, 06:33:20 UTC

ah, you had me going about the sake ;D

I've got to tell you. When they stopped to get themselves ready to approach the school and you were listing all the things they were doing, even if short, my heart started racing. I was imagining everything going to hell. everything going wrong- shit hitting the fan to be blunt about it. That was my favorite part.
That and Yasu's hecka bright jacket XDD

So they're regrouping at where Ryo and the others were at before? I bet it's a much needed relief for Ryo to have another, someone whose older, to help with the stress. I'm so nervous! They going to reach the apartment building?? Since it wasn't mentioned they got there or am I safe in assuming they got there safe. lol

Yay! Update ^^ I'm very happy I was awake to read it. Looking forward to whats going to happen next. :)

Thank you for sharing!

ceathair October 11 2008, 06:37:57 UTC

Hey you!!!!

I'm glad you liked it !!! I was kinda commenting back and forth with you while I wrote this!! I liked how I'm messing with them in this story. I also love how long your comments are....I'm really keeping things in mind, because when it's over, I'm going to revise it and there are some amelioration I'm going to do because of you. I love putting Yasu in a yellow jacket....he's the least subtle man EVER! I really love the whole K8 dynamics, which is what I'm trying to recreate despite the post-apocalyptic atmosphere.

Thank you again soooooo much ofr your comments!!! <3

epicwaters October 12 2008, 07:31:30 UTC

.I'm really keeping things in mind, because when it's over, I'm going to revise it and there are some amelioration I'm going to do because of you.
*squees* Really though, I'm bothering you with another comment just to squee at you lol When you get to that point, I'll reread it again! Well either way I will because this is being mem'd at some point.

Yasu is very unsubtle. That's why I laughed when I read that. It just fits him.
You really are messing with them! messed up train rides and subaru's mother. D: I'm a little anxious if not excited about the prospect of his story being told. Actually all of them. When I think of trains I imagine them pretty full. Not a, you're unable to move an arm full, but more like mostly all the seats are taken and maybe two or three people standing. That would become hell on rails if people were taken over and ran amok. *rambling* XD
anyhoo, chapter four at some point yay! XD

vinyaromeniel October 11 2008, 17:05:35 UTC

it took like one day to finally comment^^

This was great and I want to know what happens. At least it looks as if Baru and Yasu are still normal. And by now I understand what Ryo fears so much.
I still wonder what happened to Uchi and Ohkura but I hope you will enlighten me in future updates :)

Keep this great fic going

ceathair October 11 2008, 23:16:46 UTC

Well, you replied!! It's really awesome that you did!

Baru and Yasu are relatively normal, they do have their own nightmares and past experiences but they're mostly ok. I'm so enjoying torturing them. I really can't wait to write about the train ride they shared that turned horrible. I will keep enlightening you because you keep writing and for that, totally dedicating a chapter to you!!! You're awesome!!! <3