Comments | ceares: Ollian piece-Stumbling Forward

ceares

Ollian piece-Stumbling Forward

Aug 14, 2008 04:05

So, I'm still suffering from writer's block. I was hoping this would help.
It's for the Ollian minifest on seifen_slash

Stumbling Forward.
Olliver/Christian
Words-521

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fest, fanfic, ollian, slash

Comments 23

thelana August 14 2008, 21:59:48 UTC

"Oh." Olli grinned. "Yes, you and the shaving cream."

"You remember that?"

That really made me smile :)

I'm sorry that I caused you frustration. Dammit, should have thought of a better scene.

But selfishly enough, I'm very glad you wrote this. Love the flash forward!

ceares August 14 2008, 22:22:44 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, and I'm just sorry I couldn't work up a longer fic.

And, no actually this is the first thing I've completed in like 2 months. I'm hoping it will jump start everything else.

I was just frustrated that it took me so long to finish it. The scene was fine, I mean what could be wrong with having to watch Jo naked and wet over and over again *g*.

thelana August 14 2008, 22:27:33 UTC

What we all do in the name of research. And bah, ficlenght is more than fine. It's a minificfest after all :)

Rooting for you do get your fic mojo back. :)

randomhouses August 14 2008, 23:10:53 UTC

Aww, this was awesome! Heh, sneaky Olli. It seems they've graduated to a bathtub fetish, though. ;)

ceares August 16 2008, 15:17:21 UTC

Thanks! Yeah, they need a bigger bathroom *g*.

gaycrow August 14 2008, 23:27:23 UTC

It's lovely to see what thoughts you've put in Christian's mind ... I can totally imagine him thinking like this.

And Olli's the sly one, isn't he, prolonging the agony by slowly wrapping himself in the towel? :D

ceares August 16 2008, 15:18:18 UTC

Thank you very much! Watching the video, I couldn't help think he was totally playing Christian.

emilygoober August 15 2008, 04:23:56 UTC

thanks! this was so great. i love the cut you did to the "future" .. a really wonderful way of showing Christian's introspection. And even though it is in english, somehow you managed to capture the characters' voices (don't ask how I know that, can't explain, just take my word for it)

ceares August 16 2008, 15:18:57 UTC

I'm glad you liked that, it sort of pulled it together in my head. Thanks so much.

whatthefuckbenj August 15 2008, 11:43:32 UTC

&hearts I like that you put in that last part since it's so sweet =)

ceares August 16 2008, 15:19:55 UTC

*g* Thanks a lot, I think they are just very sweet together.