Comments | ceares: WTF-27 End of the World As We Know It-Entourage V/E

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WTF-27 End of the World As We Know It-Entourage V/E

May 27, 2008 03:54

Author: Ceares ( Read more... )

vince/eric, fic, entourage, wtf27, slash

Comments 15

caorthann May 27 2008, 12:26:31 UTC

Hi, I really enjoyed reading this fic :)

Im always on the lookout for new Entourage fic dealing with their coming out/bein found out and I think your fic handles it very well and realistically. I particularly like the format of its development over just one day and much love to the last line!

ceares May 27 2008, 12:58:51 UTC

Thanks! I admit the coming out thing is a bit of an obsession of mine as well, and I'm glad you enjoyed my take on it--especially the last line, which almost didn't make it into the fic.

dine May 27 2008, 16:34:35 UTC

oh sweet! much as I think V & E belong together, I admit the mental image of Vince with Paul Walker totally grabbed my attention. talk about overdosing on PRETTY there

ceares May 27 2008, 16:52:56 UTC

mental image of Vince with Paul Walker totally grabbed my attention. talk about overdosing on PRETTY there Hee! Sad to say, that's exactly why this fic exists. Thanks for commenting, I'm glad you liked it.

jaybee222 May 28 2008, 21:30:37 UTC

Vince/Eric is my new obsession and I really enjoyed this. Lovely characterisations and great dialogue.

ceares May 29 2008, 11:05:07 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that the dialogue and characterizations worked for you. It's a very pleasant obsession--welcome!

exeterlinden June 14 2008, 21:16:32 UTC

Ah, gorgeous :) Liked it a lot! I had to google Paul Walked, though :)

ceares June 15 2008, 17:41:11 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Paul and Adrien are sort of my bookended -too pretty for words guilty pleasures.

Just Some Pointers anonymous July 1 2008, 13:40:13 UTC

I liked the idea of the fic, that Vince would do something to totally screw over their lives like effing Paul Walker. It's just that the Vince/Eric thing happened too fast and only got one real section to even hint at the fact that Eric liked Vince (8pm). Also, throughout the fic you have a tendency of forgetting scenery and not letting the readers know who is talking. This is especially problematic in the 11am section; it took me a couple of reads to understand who was saying what, and until Drama walked in with the phone I thought they were in a bar.

This isn't meant to be a flame, just some constructive criticism.

Re: Just Some Pointers ceares July 1 2008, 16:14:08 UTC

Thanks for commenting, and I appreciate the con crit. Definitely some things for me to look out for in future fic. ( I know the scenery thing is something I always have issues with.)