Blue & Yellow

[cdiar]

Title: Blue & Yellow
Fandom: Watchmen
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 8,701
Characters: Daniel Dreiberg, Walter Kovacs
Prompt: Dan has to dress Rorschach. Because if you've ever had to dress someone roughly your own size, you end up very close together with your hands and arms all over them. Rorschach is as naked as you can get him and unable to manage the

Comments

[cdiar]

I like long reviews! MOAR! Lol. And thanks. I've been told I have a knack for emotional writing and I think there's a lot of emotion in many things that we don't think about, especially our sense.

[jackiemei]

HAPPY BIRTHDAY! :D

http://pics.livejournal.com/jackiemei/pic/00018253

[cdiar]

D'aaww! Yay! I love it! *huggles* thanks hun! I was in bed, waking up and checking my phone to see what time it was like I do several times during the night typically and I saw I had email and one was from you and I was like 'Yeeeeeeess!!" and I had to get up. haha.

[talksick42]

Hottest dressing scene ever. Wow. Never thought I could get so hot and bothered by some guy pulling on a shirt and pants.

Poor babies, the long, drawn out scenes of Walter in pain made me feel so sympathetic to his condition, and goddammit, tendons is the best and worst phrase you could have used. It makes me squik so many times.

Finally, I think you can take the b out of bromance, honey. As manly as this scene is, it's about as straight as The Road to El Dorado.

One little geography nitpick, though- near the end, Dan watches the sun rise over the Chrysler building. Dan's brownstone is somewhere near Madison Square Garden, on thirty-second street, on the west side. The Chrysler building is on forty-second, on the east side. It may not sound very far away, but it's difficult to see that building from down there. The best landmark for this scene would probably be the Empire State Building, you can see that from as far away as fourth street. Sorry, I feel so naggy.

[cdiar]

Hehe. Yeah. I saw the prompt for it and was just like "*twitches* must... write... Guh!" I can't remember whether or not the original prompt asked for sexitimes in it or not, and I left readers an option at the end as to whether or not they wanted me to continue this into sex even though I was happy with it as it was, and everybody else was damn well satisfied as well. It's like porn without the sex. XD

[rorschugar]

Hurm.(~<3)

[cdiar]

hehe.

[thelistkeeper]

The whole thing about Walter losing his job and his Rorschach identity was really tough. I liked the way things were separated too. I can just see Dan trying to convince him "You can stay with me! I'll look after you." But the priiide. Ha, it'd never work. Really great story. And <3 Jackie's art. Captures it all so well.

[cdiar]

Nah, Kovy'll be fine now. Things'll go back to normal. That's why it sucks. Lol

[regyttyger]

and yes. Jackie is a doll and her arts are beautiful

[regyttyger]

ah fuck. stupid names.