I still can't believe how you manage to blow my mind away every time you post something. :C It looks melancholy, but...I think the cross-hatch makes it look a little hopeful...? Uwah, I read too much into things. I like it a lot though; especially the shading on the shirts and sleeves, etc etc. And Reita's hair! I think that's the hardest thing to do. v_v I tried drawing Reita the other day, but that faux-hawk (Mohawk? Reihawk?) starts really weirdly and I just can't seem to find the crown of his hair. I usually just resort to the flat hairstyle he had in Reila. XD;
Mm...mind if I give a spot of critique? XD; I know you didn't ask for it here, but I sort of see something...?
You're the first one to notice the melancholic side of it. *laughs* Thank you, you're sweet as always. *blush* And no, I don't mind, go ahead - I like honesty. *smiles*
Really? I'm surprised. Ruki looks...sort of clingy/depressed here. XD;
Anyway, onto the critique. The right shoulder seems a little...low to me. It looks like he's pushing them down with his shoulder blades or something, and stretching his neck out to an almost inhuman level. O_o If you followed the curve of his neck, it'd actually be quite a bit higher; but it would cover a large portion of Ruki if you DID fix it. The planes of the shoulders seem to be at a sort of...reflex angle, like he's trying to turn awkwardly away from Ruki. I don't know if it was intentional or not, but I thought I'd point it out anyway. ^^;
Uwah~! So much critique. v_v I DO like it though. I'm sorry if this makes it sound like I'm criticizing it too much~
The original meaning of the scene is Ruki asking Reita if he can hold him one last time. Which, by the way, explains why Reita's looking awkward. *grin* But yes, I am aware that Reita's shoulders are a bit funky looking, so I'm not surprised by what you say. *nod* And please, no need to be sorry. *smiles* I'm the last person you need to apologise to for criticising too much. I actually quite like knowing what is wrong.
Awh... I'm glad you think so, truly. *blushing much* I was hoping that not drawing their faces would add instead of subtract something from the image, so thank you. <3 *smiles*
I wonder where are you? It's like a week I'm online in msn and I truly miss you there. After all who except you was coloring my days? heheh that's true! no one >.>
I guess it's a bit late commenting here, but anyway I hope you'll get notification XD What I wanted to say with all my disliking of this V.D... hope you spent it nice and hope everything is truly fine with you =3
PS: abotu teh drawing. not my right to judge XD but Ruki's arm... ughhh his arm >.> anatomically located not right <.<;; I mean the way he embraces and elbow... I guess you know what I mean... But the feeling about whole drawing is really strong and cool *thumbs up* *adores*
Awh, I'm sorry. I haven't been online because I have felt that I haven't been in a position where I can talk to people casually, so I've stayed away as a way to avoid misunderstandings. *sweatdrop*
My Valentine's Day was much like any normal day, I'll have to say. I hope you had a nice VD, too, even though you say you dislike it (as do I).
I am very aware of that, but thank you for pointing it out, still. *smiles* And thank you also for such complimenting words, you're very kind. <3
I do hope you're well and safe, really. *cling to arm*
Awe I see now, I was just a bit worried if something could happen with you or else. But I'm happy you're okay sweetheart ^_^
VD sucks.. I don't remember what happened though XD
Is just the pic is really cool.. even if you'd erase a bit of that piece of arm it wiuld be perfecto~ *_*
*huggles* I'm okay, fine, super XD we're with stomach try to live in piece, but he's like a Napoleon or something... like a little pain int he ass XD hope you understand what I mean XD
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Mm...mind if I give a spot of critique? XD; I know you didn't ask for it here, but I sort of see something...?
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Anyway, onto the critique. The right shoulder seems a little...low to me. It looks like he's pushing them down with his shoulder blades or something, and stretching his neck out to an almost inhuman level. O_o If you followed the curve of his neck, it'd actually be quite a bit higher; but it would cover a large portion of Ruki if you DID fix it. The planes of the shoulders seem to be at a sort of...reflex angle, like he's trying to turn awkwardly away from Ruki. I don't know if it was intentional or not, but I thought I'd point it out anyway. ^^;
Uwah~! So much critique. v_v I DO like it though. I'm sorry if this makes it sound like I'm criticizing it too much~
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So talented .. <3 You're such
a good artist. Although you
did avoid their faces, it
seems very .. fitting. ♥
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I guess it's a bit late commenting here, but anyway I hope you'll get notification XD
What I wanted to say with all my disliking of this V.D... hope you spent it nice and hope everything is truly fine with you =3
PS: abotu teh drawing. not my right to judge XD but Ruki's arm... ughhh his arm >.> anatomically located not right <.<;; I mean the way he embraces and elbow... I guess you know what I mean... But the feeling about whole drawing is really strong and cool *thumbs up* *adores*
x3 your little star
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My Valentine's Day was much like any normal day, I'll have to say. I hope you had a nice VD, too, even though you say you dislike it (as do I).
I am very aware of that, but thank you for pointing it out, still. *smiles* And thank you also for such complimenting words, you're very kind. <3
I do hope you're well and safe, really. *cling to arm*
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VD sucks.. I don't remember what happened though XD
Is just the pic is really cool.. even if you'd erase a bit of that piece of arm it wiuld be perfecto~ *_*
*huggles* I'm okay, fine, super XD we're with stomach try to live in piece, but he's like a Napoleon or something... like a little pain int he ass XD hope you understand what I mean XD
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Thank you kindly. *shy smile*
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