Comments | caveat__lector: Multi-part production, [FMA]: "Symphonic Suite #2" (Roy/Winry)

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Multi-part production, [FMA]: "Symphonic Suite #2" (Roy/Winry)

Feb 05, 2006 01:46

I'm still...going...with this. @.@;; Believe it or not. Anyway, I'm seriously hoping that you guys, as readers, are enjoying this fic, because I was so very nervous about it's initial production. ^^;; Basically: IF YOU LIKE, YOU COMMENT, BECAUSE MAN, I'M REALLY STUCK ON THIS THING ( Read more... )

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thisisnotmyname February 5 2006, 08:10:12 UTC

ZOMG SUPER SEKRIT OTP but not really otp, just i fucking love the idea of roywin. i think this is the only het pairing i am really into and this looks glorious so far. i love it. keep writing it omg.

forgottenlover February 5 2006, 15:59:05 UTC

::blinks at you:: I think you've pulled off Winry beautifully in my personal opinion.

leasspell_dael February 5 2006, 22:47:19 UTC

Winry / Roy will be a hard pairing to pull off, but this is certainly a promising start. I think you've done an excellent job at portraying the conflict Winry feels about Roy; him as the murderer of her parents versus him as Ed's superior officer/ally. He has done both good and bad to the people she loves, and while she's far from ready to forgive him for what he did to her parents, she can't ignore the fact that there's also good in him as well. Definitely a promising beginning here, and I hope to see more!

I READ. I LIKED. I COMMENTED. militarypenguin February 6 2006, 02:00:09 UTC

Beuuuuteeeful thus far. I think you're handling Winry's characterization very well especially for a first-timer, and I'm actually enjoying some of these flash backs. :D

Keep it up!

strawberrykaoru February 6 2006, 03:54:18 UTC

Hmm, Winry seem to go through a lot of moodswings when around Roy's company; again, normal, seeing as how she still doesn't really know and accept Roy.

Lurvely, hoping to see more! =D