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"Sparks" (Oneshot)

Jul 23, 2011 11:12

Title: “Sparks”
Author: caughtfire(x-posted to my dreamwidth, juxtapose)
Rating/Genre: PG-13, fluff
Pairing(s): eventual Merthur, a bit of Gwen/Lancelot
Summary: Merlin wants to know what love feels like.
Disclaimer: I don’t own Merlin.

( What does love feel like? )

pairing: merthur, fanfiction

Comments 21

opie_black July 23 2011, 15:56:04 UTC

Very sweet. I loved Merlin's realization of his love for Arthur. ^_^

caughtfire July 23 2011, 16:28:06 UTC

Thank you!

yenny2206 July 23 2011, 16:49:51 UTC

But love, Merlin realizes, isn't about perfection at all. It's about accepting and understanding all the imperfections, and wanting them all the same.

Wonderfully sweet and honest story.

caughtfire July 23 2011, 17:40:27 UTC

Aw, thank you so much for reading!

siennis July 23 2011, 16:50:43 UTC

So sweet and fluffy! I loved it!

caughtfire July 23 2011, 17:40:37 UTC

Thank you!

niekebieke July 23 2011, 16:59:17 UTC

this was so sweet!! And love really is something very personal, so I loved how it took Merlin awhile to figure out he was actually head over heels in love with Arthur!
And Lancelot repeating his question after a beat was just so funny. I imagined him saying it in a really dry and understated way.

caughtfire July 23 2011, 17:41:00 UTC

Haha, thanks so much.

And yeah, I don't put enough Lancelot in my fics so I thought I'd give him a go. Glad you enjoyed him!

xthursdaynextx July 23 2011, 20:03:51 UTC

This was so sweet. I loved the bit where he doesn't hear Lancelot's question because he's too busy thinking about Arthur.

caughtfire July 23 2011, 21:16:11 UTC

Aw, thanks for reading! Glad you liked.